Achromatic World

I love the concept but it was a little short and I feel like the climax was too close to the end.

Week 8 storyreel

I feel like the climax could use some work, the problem was too easily solved.

Pepi ii

I like your concept but the ending could use some work, how many mummies were there because they had enough to take over England?

The Newlydeads

maybe add some audio or slow down the sub titles?

The Newlydeads

I think it's a little hard to understand without the audio, but I think I get what the main idea for the plot is. The drawings were good and I liked the subtitles

A World Without Shadows Storyboard

I like this concept of the shadows, I like how at the end he has to accept his shadows and overcome his fears.

The Lonely Fish: Rough Draft

I like the music you added! adds a lot of action

Finley's Story Acts 1,2, &3

I'm confused, are shadows their own beings or are they like imagination?

Pixar full story reel

the story is hard to understand with the voices? add an introduction before someone speaks?

Lux week 7

I like this story maybe expand on the part where he has already been turned into the monster

act 1 2 and 3 dream factory

Its pretty hard to see it on the phone but good story

Act 1+2 storyreel.

I’m a little confused on the middle place? How did the spirits get there? Are the spirits used to be humans ?

Cowspiracy Acts 1 + 2

This is a very unique plot! I love it! How did nobody else see that the crowd was full of cows?

Tristen and Brad PARTY Act 2

This is such a well taught out and well put to gether story! Who is the frozen lady?

The Story of the Reptilian Vampires Continues

Maybe you could add a couple more drawings to show what everything looks like?

act i and act ii

This story has a very interesting plot line! I love how the illustrations further the story beyond the narration.

Bully Dog Act 1

im a little confused, Who is the main character? other than that the drawings are super good!

Act 1 Story Reel

I like how the audience can understand what’s going on even without words

Act one storyreel

try talking clearer it was a little hard to understand at some points

Roommates Act I

why did he get rejected from his job?

ACT #1 ANIMATION

like how you added voices to your story and get animation

Team Mj

can you expand on why she couldn't find a passion? maybe add one or two drawings to go with your story

Story Spine

How did going into the past make things worse? Maybe give some specific examples on why it turned worse

Derek story board

How didn’t anyone else find the tree? Maybe expand on how it was hidden?

Team Mitches Story Spine

Maybe elaborate on why the organization needs the watch.