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Achromatic World

I love the concept but it was a little short and I feel like the climax was too close to the end.

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Week 8 storyreel

I feel like the climax could use some work, the problem was too easily solved.

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Pepi ii

I like your concept but the ending could use some work, how many mummies were there because they had enough to take over England?

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The Newlydeads

maybe add some audio or slow down the sub titles?

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The Newlydeads

I think it's a little hard to understand without the audio, but I think I get what the main idea for the plot is. The drawings were good and I liked the subtitles

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A World Without Shadows Storyboard

I like this concept of the shadows, I like how at the end he has to accept his shadows and overcome his fears.

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The Lonely Fish: Rough Draft

I like the music you added! adds a lot of action

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Finley's Story Acts 1,2, &3

I'm confused, are shadows their own beings or are they like imagination?

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Pixar full story reel

the story is hard to understand with the voices? add an introduction before someone speaks?

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Lux week 7

I like this story maybe expand on the part where he has already been turned into the monster

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act 1 2 and 3 dream factory

Its pretty hard to see it on the phone but good story

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Act 1+2 storyreel.

I’m a little confused on the middle place? How did the spirits get there? Are the spirits used to be humans ?

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Cowspiracy Acts 1 + 2

This is a very unique plot! I love it! How did nobody else see that the crowd was full of cows?

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Tristen and Brad PARTY Act 2

This is such a well taught out and well put to gether story! Who is the frozen lady?

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The Story of the Reptilian Vampires Continues

Maybe you could add a couple more drawings to show what everything looks like?

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act i and act ii

This story has a very interesting plot line! I love how the illustrations further the story beyond the narration.

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Bully Dog Act 1

im a little confused, Who is the main character? other than that the drawings are super good!

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Act 1 Story Reel

I like how the audience can understand what’s going on even without words

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Act one storyreel

try talking clearer it was a little hard to understand at some points

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Roommates Act I

why did he get rejected from his job?

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ACT #1 ANIMATION

like how you added voices to your story and get animation

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Team Mj

can you expand on why she couldn't find a passion? maybe add one or two drawings to go with your story

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Story Spine

How did going into the past make things worse? Maybe give some specific examples on why it turned worse

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Derek story board

How didn’t anyone else find the tree? Maybe expand on how it was hidden?

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Team Mitches Story Spine

Maybe elaborate on why the organization needs the watch.

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