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My character profile

Beautifully put together and the character's external attributes are imaginative. Good Work

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My character profile

me too

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Charcter Profile-Selina

I like your character so far! I think there could be a bit more information included but otherwise it’s great!

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Character Profile

I really liked your idea! Everything was clear. And I can’t wait to hear more about this idea!

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Character

Brilliant Suggestion

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Avery (character profile)

Interesting Profile.

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Gilda

I enjoy the fact that Gilda is a Leader and Innovator, struggling with pushing the boundaries of her magic community rules. Good work

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What if...

love how you put together your what if ideas, the images are lovely especially that of the ocean in the sky, I can already picture a world in which everyone looked up at a dozen or so dolphins display their flight skills in the ocean in the sky. darn

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What If Questions by Alina, Andrew, and Gillian

I really liked the sea horse what if idea, something like that would translate over in the underwater territory of the ocean in it’s unique way.

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What If....Naomi Velandia

it would be interesting to watch a turtle burn the mic .

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WHAT IF---

The first what if has got me intrigued.

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what if?

Great Ideas you have got here, however what will the shadow be escaping from ?

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What if

Very Interesting ideas, I am most interested in cowboys living in the time of dinosaurs... where will they get their horses and cows from ?

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Week 1 Deliverable: "What if" Teaser

Thank you.

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Week 1 Deliverable: "What if" Teaser

Thank you Sophia, In this what if, business is a sport for both fun, pleasure and profit.

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Week 1 Deliverable: "What if" Teaser

Instead of people affecting houses in this what if we will explore the effect houses have on people.

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Week 1 Deliverable: "What if" Teaser

Have you heard of the Kardashev Scale ? if not look it up. In this what if the girl will be as powerful as a Type 2 civilisation

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