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Earth's lament

Good story.

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Turtle Go Home

Great drawing, love the story.

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3

The voice could be better. Confused On the story. Its everywhere I feel like.

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Baked Back Together

Voice could be clearer. Its getting happy in the middle I love that part. Back sad again when he started his business. I wish all of one part was sad and then it stayed happy. I never thought pepper was going to answer the phone. So happy the bakery is open again!!!

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Dream

Very cool story. I like how the story is played out. Why did Gilda have dreams about turning fairies into humans?. I think the pictures good be clearer about what the story is trying to say.

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Way Home- full storyreel

I think this story is really good. The music in the background makes me feel like I am in a movie theater. I understand this story the unusual friend is really neat. The art is good!.

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Cora, Friendship and Accepting Your Past

happy feelings. I think the moral of the story is make sure you know who you're friends are.

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Leaf dude finale

the mood was sad in the start and towards the end it was like never give up. I think our story is good!

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Lewis and his Kite -- Rough Cut

I think the moral of the story is to love what you have. happy and true ending.

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Terra's act 1,2 and 3

this is a happy feeling that terra likes to talk a lot and has friends. I think the moral of the story is having friends and talking to them is good but once it is enough its enough

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Cowboys

cool story a little confusing though.

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Ahmik

interesting story and drawing. how did his parents die just because one thing happned. the dead buffalo is kind of random.

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Gibby's story: Act 2

good speaking loud and clear and interesting story.

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Covid Aventuras

I feel like the audio could be better. interesting story. everything in this is happening in todays world.

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cloud surfing storyboard

cool drawings. a up lifting story instead of a sad one.

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ferris and gordon crazy insane adenturwe ft mozila fox

amazing drawing. the pictures are kind of blank. more explaning would be nice.

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Golden dream

interesting story. cool drawing. maybe you could talk about why he got bullied.

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Austin's Story

good drawings but I think the story could be clearer.

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Wyoming Act 1

good drawings. why did y'all chose Wyoming. Such a interesting topic.

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Gibby's story: Act 1

good pictures. they are kind of dark. sounds like a good story. maybe he should try to talk and become friends with people.

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Act 1

interesting drawing. more information could help understand the story.

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Act 1

cool idea. Could the real person actually see the ghost? Say a bit more about ari.

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Celeste Act 1 Story Reel

cool drawing. Great idea of elephants to talk. you should add more parts at the end on why she doesn't know what to do.

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Grandma Story Act 1

good idea. Why does she do everything with her cat. good drawing

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Spaceship Boy

I like this idea great story. On the other side of the vent it could be an actual world and not space.

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