Story Spine Cloud Surfing idk
I loved the creativity in how she felt guilty after messing up! I bet that’ll resonate with a lot of people. Something I would want more clarification is the cloud ocean. I think it’s REALLY cool and I want to live there, but are they living in the sky? Is it some magical shenanigans? An explanation would be cool, but the mystery of it all might be even cooler. Idk, it’s entirely up to you.