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Farron's First Story Spine

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feedback. Our story spine is still in a rough draft and we indeed need to go into details in our story.

The idea of the story is that Farron lives on the top of the mountains with a community that valued conformity and security. They were raised that outside of the mountains is unhabitable. Every day they would eat two potatoes to retain their strength and energy so they can continue to reinforce their barriers from outsiders. Farron is a character who likes to explore and try new things. One day, they decided to eat one potato instead of two which led to exile from the community.

Avar is a wise and leader character that lives in the valley and they happen to meet Farron when Farron tumbles downhill from the mountains (We will go into more details in our week 5 submission).

I hope this is helpful for you to visualize our story spine better! :)

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Farron's First Story Spine

Yes, you are correct that we are unclear who Avar is. Our story spine is still developing, and we will elaborate more about Avar in our next submission. Avar is a wise leader in the story who lives in a valley with colorful people, places, and food. Avar shows Farron that it is good to bring diversity into our lives.

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Farron's First Story Spine

Thank you for your suggestion, it is a good one! We will take that into our consideration.

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