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Flora and Fauna

I like the story and the video.

8

Week

Turtle Go Home

I like the video editing and enjoy the story.

8

Week

High Up

I like the fact that this video is animated it shows that you put a lot of effort on it.

8

Week

Wyoming

The video is very colorful and it is edited well. I like the story too.

8

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Final Story

I like the overall story and idea of it and I also like the video transitions. But the video needs color.

7

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Jonathon Q. Sniffer; Act 1, 2, and 3

Good Drawings

7

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"Pull" Act 1,2 & 3

I like the amount of effort.

7

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Pixar full story reel

Nice drawings.

7

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Act 1, Act 2 and part of Act 3.

Nice animation

7

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Cowspiracy All 3 acts

I like your story

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Draw Your Life (Ted's Minor Beats - Act 3)

Great story

7

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Griffin, Willow, and Their Furniture ACT 3

I like your drawings

6

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Leaf Guy P2

I liked the the overall presentation of the story but the minor beats where repetitive

6

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Jonathon Q. Sniffer; Act 1 and 2

Nice visual effects

5

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Draw Your Life (Ted's Minor Beats - Act 1)

I like your story

5

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Jonathon Q. Sniffer: Story Spine.

I like the video it is very intertaining.

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Ahmik

I like your story

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Story Xperiential Week 5 Submission

Next time make the video present more of the picture because it is hard to see it.

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week 5 Juan Jose Singh

If you take a clear picture of your art the video would be more entertaining.

5

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Cowboys

I like your story. And I like your drawings.

4

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george’s story spine!

The art style is fantastic! Also, the plot is incredibly pleasant and charming.

4

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Team Mitches Story Spine

I think the story's spine is wonderful, but it might use some additional specifics.

4

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Story Spine

The only thing that perplexed me was determining which of your characters was the primary character.

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Jonathon Q. Sniffer

I admire how your morale ties in so well with the story and Jonathan's struggle to overcome challenges.

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Story Spine

I like how the lines really add detail to the video

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