Way Home- full storyreel

The incorporation with the music is really good, I think the narration could use some work. The story seems complete and well created

Shock and Mars

The art style and story are very cool, I think narration would improve the pace, if you were to keep the words then increasing the time would make it easier to read.

Hunter

The character design and background is very well done, I think the narration could use some improvement. Other than that it is really well done!

Ryan

I really like the audio choice, it adds the tone to the theme, I'm confused how they saw the tsunami underground.

Gatudo, and zeros

I like the comic book style of the art work, I think changing the time on each picture and audio quality would improve it

Week 7 Submission

The art is fascinating, the story is clear and to the point!

Lux week 7

The art is really fun to look at, I also really like the pacing!

Griffin, Willow, and Their Furniture ACT 2

Great art! I think the story has some holes in it but are easy to fix. Great job!

Lux Week 6

I like the drawings, I'm confused what the "umbra" creatures are, I think talking louder would sound better

Story Xperiential Week 6 Submission

The idea is original, I think talking louder would make it more clear

Benny’s Adventure Week 6

The art is really interesting to look at, I'm still confused on why Ben has wings.

Intrusive - Week 6

I really like the simplicity of the characters, I think shortening the breaks in between would make it smoother

Roommates Act 1 & 2

the characters are very well drawn, the narration is good but can be confusing near the end

Grandma Story Act 1

the emotional change is really sharp, interesting

Week 5

interesting story but the zoom is odd

Act 1 Storyreel

interesting story, I think it could use more polish near the end. The art is really cool!

Weighted- Act one

Very professionally done! the art work is easy to understand and flows with the story well!

Earth's lament

This feels really refined and well done, the artwork is clean and understanding based on the story

Week 5 Submission

I really like the way you used the color! I like how you used the first person type of point of view

The pilgrims

Interesting concept!

Story Xperiential Week 4 Submission

cool idea!

Story Spine

I like the idea, very different!

Bully Dog Story Spine

I like the usage of the three tone color with the inclusion of the characters colors, brings them out while keeping it simple :)

Story Spine

the color is really nice, I like the contrast and dimensions

Kara

I like the use of the shadows in the art