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Olivia Character Profile

Hi! i love the concept of this character an the obstacle of her motivation. my questions are how this dress works? and how she obtain the dress?

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Team Forsa week 1

I like the three ideas, but i love the first one. for the drawing, you can choose by an app? how this is possible and who invented that? and what happens to the parents that are never choosed?

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What If

i like the thirsd story and the idea of good zombies or even neutral normal zombie-people and his world. the humans can live with the good version of the zombies?

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What If…

Wow , the second idea makes me think a lot about our society and history with that kind of photos. i love the idea and i wonder if that happens with al types of photos?, analoge, digital,form camera, from phone? and what`s makes them ephemeral?

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My What if's

i like a lot the second one, the mulltiple powers taht you can have form the multiple symbols and combinations of desings its just great! i love to know mor of it, of it works..., how is the ink made?, based on what? and thers some kind of magic to injekt the ink?

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WHAT IF TEASER

Love the second idea, because marks a time limit for the story. i wonder what is the character writing? it is relevant for the story? and, the idea tath the character knows about the time he has left is a great pshycological pressure for the rythim of the plot.

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Marcus Webb's Three What Ifs

Im very interested in the third idea, makes me thik if it can develop as an a wonderfull and colorfull adventure but with a deep , dark and real side. a story between "state of mind" worlds and the significance of it.

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