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Unconditional Love

Thank you very much, Andres! :)

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Unconditional Love

Hi Diego, thank you sooo much for the kind words. You have no idea how much they mean to me!!! I feel so much better now about my submission :) Truly, many, many thanks! :) I really DO appreciate it :)

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Love and Death Full Final

Incredible :)

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Toro

Incredible, fantastic work! :)

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Grandfather Story Reel

Incredible!!! Simply amazing! :) Cheers!

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Grandfather - Act 1 and 2

Oh boy, I just LOVE your story!!! It is so heart-melting and touching 😊 I always enjoy the stories that are about love… all kinds of love. To be honest, though, I would probably be hooked with your story even if the plot wasn’t as good (but it is), just because your drawings are awesome!!! I just want to look at them again and again 😊 😊 😊 Respect!

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3 Ambers

Amazing drawings! Great ideas! My favorite one is “What if Art came to life?”
I wonder if all art pieces will come to life or just some of them? May be just the art that was created with extremely strong emotions?

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Week 1-What if?

Amazing drawings! Great job!

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What If....

I just love your drawings! They are great!!! The idea that I liked the most is the first one – with the gecko. I wonder how the kids will be able to communicate with the gecko. Are all kids able to hear/talk to the gecko or just selected kids can? Is the gecko able to communicate with older people? How will the gecko get the kids’ attention and how will convince them that its lessons are good for them? Will an evil person trap the gecko so that he/she can make tons of money out of it? Why would the gecko want to help the kids? Will it ask for something in return?
I would love to see your story! 😊 Cheers!

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What if

Hey, congrats on your ideas! The idea that I liked the most is the third one. I really like the concept of turning scary and negative things and emotions into positive ones. I wonder if all monsters would be nice. Or may be only one monster is an exception to the rule and is actually a friend. Will the monsters be able to get out from under there or they will be stuck under the bed forever? Who would make/put the monster under the bed and at what age of the bed’s owner?
A possible perspective could be that the monster is the imaginary representation of the parts of us that are suppressed. The ones that we resist and deny. And indeed, we should accept and befriend those parts of us as well as the good ones so that we can be at peace whit ourselves.
Once we realize that the monster is a friend – what will happen to it? Will it disappear? Will we miss it?
I’m excited to see how your story will go 😊

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What If Runs in the Family

Fantastic drawings! I loved the idea with the magical quest the most. I wonder what the quest would be like. If it will be dangerous with traps in like the physical world or with lessons on how one should take good care of a child? Or if it will be more like a quest in the spiritual world? It will be interesting if it is like figuring out yourself and resolving your personal issues plus all that for the other spouse as well as compatibility checks in order to deserve to get a baby. Also, I wonder if the future parents will know or even get to decide characteristics of the baby. Like gender, color of the eyes, hair etc.
Can’t wait to see how your story will go 😊 Cheers!

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Rick O’Meara What if teasers

I love the way you draw! Especially the expression of death in the last picture is just unbelievable! It just blew me away :D
I liked the first idea the most because I’m a sucker for a love story. I wonder who is giving the pictures? And at what age is a person allowed to see the picture that was given to him/her? Also, what would happen if someone was given a picture of a person with a twin? And what if the twins on the other hand swapped their pictures by mistake? What would happen if someone stole a picture in order to convince a crush of his to be with him?
Also, will all people be getting a picture? And if we do live in such a world, I bet there would be a big database with all people’s pictures and when you scan the one that was given to you – the system gives you the address of your true love. Wouldn’t that be easy? 😊

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What if...

I totally agree with this comment. I also liked the plant idea the most! I wonder whether all kinds of plants could talk or just some of them? Also will the plants talk to each other as well?

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What If.

I loved the watch idea! I really enjoy love related stories and this one has an enormous potential. I wonder how did the watch get broken in the first place? Did he break it himself? If yes - was it intentionally or not? May be only self-aware people could have a working watch. Or if the watch was broken from the beginning, what could be the reason for that? And how would he find out that the watch isn’t working?
The drawing is awesome and I can’t wait to see more of that story.

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What If?

I liked a lot all 3 ideas and indeed your drawing skills are great!!!
There are a lot of comments on the train idea, and I would just add that may be if at the end all is well, people survive and all… the trench could become a fun destination like a resort or amusement park 😊

My favorite idea is the hamster one. I just love the fact that the main character is a hamster because I LOVE hamsters! My current one is called Michaela 😊. And I’m excited to see how your story will go. I wonder whether the tiny hamster will try to escape so that it can reach the stars (candy). I also wonder how it will see the stars in the first place. I know that a hamster’s enclosure shouldn’t be next to a window since they shouldn’t be on direct sunlight so that it doesn’t get too hot for them. It could be next to a window that doesn’t get a lot of sunshine. Or maybe the owners took the hamster to an adventure with a tent for example and this is how the hamster really saw and appreciated the stars.
I can’t wait to see more 😊

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