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Ahmik

i love this!

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Week 3 Drawing

how would leoni fit in this world? is this the dark alley they have to walk through to get to sonic?

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City ruled by wind

i love the perspective that you drew in and the attention to detail! he lost his shoes lol. this is honestly an amazing submission

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Derek seen

i am confused on what is going on here. i did look at back at your past submissions, but derek does not seem like he would live in the mountains?

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Week Three Deliverable

i love the drawing and bait is an adorable character! i cant tell if the octopus is a friend or a foe. maybe you could try drawing a rlllly exaggerated mean face or a nice face

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Sandys Room

i love the concept of a child in a painting, looking out on our world. maybe you could try to make it clearer in the drawing that it is a painting and that sandy is stuck? you could do that by maybe drawing a famous painting and showing bars cuz she cant get out

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Magic of Music

i love the depth that you used and the individuality shown thru the hair!

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Character Profile - Mónica Juárez

I love these characters! Hunter is so cute, and i love the attention to detail with the scar! One thing that i find unclear is why they would get exiled from their planet?

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Grimmhilda- Intro

I love how you are spotlighting different body types! One thing that is unclear is why do her limbs fall off? is that normal in her world, or is she the only one?

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Say Hello to Amaya!

I LOVE this character! The lesson is one that could be very helpful for a lot of people. Is Raven her cat? And if so, why is she not allowed to take Raven with her?

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What If

i like the shadow one. can we see the emotions of our own shadows? can we talk to them?

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What if? -Neo

i love the demon idea! it could be relatable for a lot of people! how did it happen? can other people see the demon?

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“What if” ideas

i love the last one! it opens up a whole new realm of possibility! where does the portal lead? what are the consequences of going through?

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What if......

my favorite one was the invisible souls one. is it like among us? they can only spectate, not interfere? or can they interact with the living?

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What If

My favorite idea was the arcade one. it makes me wonder, why does it want the identity? did the same thing happen to it, and its just a vicious cycle?

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What-ifs

My favorite idea was the "what if the villains won". It makes me wonder, what story is it? is it a story we all know and love, or a new one?

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Covid Adventures

I really loved your What If idea! It makes me wonder, how did the portal appear? Did the characters who went through have to fight for it?

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