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Cian and the Metaverse * Final Submission *

I love the story and the drawings. I was wondering: What kind of money he earns? bitcoin or something? What kind of food he eats?

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Cian and the Metaverse * Final Submission *

I love the story. I was wondering if in this metaverse he earns money (bitcoin or something) What kind of food he eat?

8

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E L I X I R

I love the story and the characters. Just only when the father walks with his son for the first time. Maybe more short than now.

8

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Lily

I love the drawings. The story is beautiful. However, for me wasn't clear about her leg. IN some of the drawings have the bandage and the others don't. Have she been healed? How did she recover from injury?

8

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Bean. (Full Storyboard)

I love the evolution if this story. I think that is time to go to the next step: finishing the entire with colors and everything

8

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Orion the Brave

I watched the process and I just to say. Congrats, your story reel improves a lot. I love that it doesn't need dialogs. Background music helps a lot!

7

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Grandpa & the Machine Act:1,2,3

I love the drawings and the evolution of the story from the previews. I think that the daughter could doing more. I mean about helping to her dad. :)

7

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Mr. Charcoal in Recovery-Land

I love the introduction that made the story strongest. congrats

7

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Marin- Acts 1-3

I love the story and the improve that you were making related to the pasts acts. The new scenes help a lot with the story. Don't worry about the length of this story reel. I made a long one as well.

7

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Por las barbas de mi gato - My cat´s whiskers

Thank you Connie: I'll change the parts that you are suggesting. Just a question: Do you think that the moral of the story should be change? or How can we put the content more clear to get the moral?
Thanks in advance

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Por las barbas de mi gato - My cat´s whiskers

Thank you Andrea! I really appreciate your comments

7

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Wolf and Dragon- Acts 1, 2, & 3- Kayla Stith

- I love this story its nice and warming
- Just a little detail maybe when the wolf is sleeping something in the scene marks that the time passes larger than a night.
- Pitaya would be nice if she learns something as a wolf and keeps with her in their new home, Howling maybe?

6

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The shadow's ACT 2

I love the story, I want t know more about it

6

Week

Act One and Two

I LOVE THE MOST: the illustrations. For me was a little confusing about the introduction of these acts. Maybe my suggestion could be an little introduction.

6

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Love and Death Act 1 and Act 2

-I like the way that story is telling
- Is not about unclear or confusing. Just I´m wondering is this story a cliche? or Do you have a turning point?
- It could be nice if the end is not expecting from the audience.

6

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Porcelain bird

- I like the idea of a "toy or porcelain bird" that wondering life as a bird
- I'm little confused about why the other birds in the beach don´t like him
- Maybe with more drawings or sounds help the story to make it stronger

6

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Act 1 & 2 Storyreel

- I love the arc of the main character, a positive one
- In the beginning of the story there are not that we can see that is a "magic world or something like that".
- Maybe could have something in the story that brings tips that there are special world that could have potions,etc before the main character knows about it

6

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Bean. Act 1 and 2

- I love the cat character I hope it has a relevant story inside
- Why apparently is so perfect until cat appearance?
- For me is ok, in this point. However I want to know more about cat. I'm curious.

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Act 2: Omen vs the Spirits

- I like the idea of magic cat and his powers with pranks
- Why is the main reason that Omen needs to fight ghosts?
-Maybe a drawing could help the idea of Omen needs to fight ghosts

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Axel the Kangaroo, Acts 1 + 2

-I like the idea of see a kangaroo be a strong character.
-I´m confused about the reason of Tony about what he is angry at Axel?
- Suggestion: Maybe a drawing that shows better what did Axel to Tony to made him mad

5

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Rugula's Passion Act 1

I really love this story. Just two elements that I'm confusing with. How can the monster take objects if in her hands has eyes (I love the idea that hands are eyes, however I don't know How she take objects with both hands). I'm confusing about if the human sees her in the same "dimension" or is a parallel when the human come through the new space?

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Week 5 Lily the Lion Cub

I love the story and for me is more clear the fact of her leg. I´m confusing about if she is caring for her siblings and she doesn't have the entire health. Maybe when she is siting with her bros and sis, put in the drawing something that the audience catch this detail.

5

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Lenny & Twirl

I love the timing of the storytelling It keeps me watching every second I would like to see more

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Orion the Brave - Act1

I love the drawings and the story. I want to watch the rest of the story

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Act 1: Omen, the black cat

I love the development of the story. The pranks were the best. I want to be the rest of the story.

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