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Creative Journey (WIP) (Sarah Estes)

I like the story of wanting to have a perfect project but you don't know how to approach that or execute that. Its a relatable issue with artists that want to have perfection. The art style is unique and cute as well. I think music would've made the story stronger, but overall I enjoyed it!

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Week

Cat Got Your Tongue?

I love the simple story of the cat wanting more love from the owner when she started dating. There seemed to be more room for improvement in showing us more of the cats hijinxs and what the cat does more to make the boyfriend mad? Overall it's sweet and to the point.

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Week

Oval

I like the idea of another universe being contained within ours, and that the world isn't too differen't from ours, except for a few key factors, like that there are talking cats that live in normal society. I like the story of purpose and wanting to do more with your life as the main character does. For the second planet I think it could be implied that it's in a crystal ball since holding a gas that's a second universe seems less practical. I also like the idea of the suns getting brighter the more good he does, kinda a sweet alagory for a superhero origin story. The main character is named kirk like the captain from Star Trek TOS, nice touch. I'm a bit confused on what the smaller universe and the significance of it was, but overall I enjoyed it!

8

Week

love

I love the style and the concept in that its very simple and you understand the ideal version of love depicted. Very curious if they're the only shapes in this world? But overall I enjoyed it!

8

Week

Partners in Crime

I like the spy vs spy turned romance type plot. Kinda gives me the kinda vibe I would get from a series like The Great Pretender, or Lupin. I would love the use of Wild Side from Beastars, it overall matches the fun tone you were going for. Overall enjoyed it a lot! Although some of the characters motivations could've been flushed out, it didn't really need it since it was kind of a sweet short anyways.

8

Week

Escape From Channel 52

I love the voicework you guys did, it was very adorable and the dialogue was very funny. I'm a sucker for stories where characters are transported into another world kinda like a alice in wonderland scenerio. The main character seems to be reminiscent of Mike TV from Willy Wonka who was obsessed with TV, which I thought was a good choice for the story. I think something that could be made stronger is the designs of the human characters could differ slightly from the cartoon. Also I was a bit unclear about the power that the remote has, is it able to pause the tv and fast forward and rewind the show? Kinda like the remote from the Adam Sandler movie Click, that could be used as a useful weapon for the journey. Either way I love the story!

8

Week

Dreams Storyreel

I love the story about wanting to do more with your life and put your creativity out there, it seems indicative with every artists dream. And I'm just wondering if the mysterious man was like The Sand man like the mystical being that gives peoples dreams. That was a pretty interesting character? The ending was a bit anticlimactic as she just leaves the facility. Maybe she uses what she learned there to make her own art and share it to the world somehow. Also is there a facility where they make nightmares? Either way I love the story thus far!

7

Week

The Book of S Act 2

Act 1 is already uploaded and she wanted to get rid of the book since it was picked up by some peers of hers and her drawings got complimented, which she took the wrong way.

7

Week

Escape from Area 51

I like that this is a much darker version of that Escape from Area 51 from a few years ago. There's actual death and stakes to the story. I also like that there's one human that helps as in the original movie they don't really have a human allie. My confusion comes when I'm wondering why the humans want the aliens. In the original movie they were captured and were actually responsible for creating a lot of modern technology. Unless they're just captured just to get studied on. So far loving it!

6

Week

Act 2: Omen vs the Spirits

Oops, sorry for the second reply

6

Week

Act 2: Omen vs the Spirits

I love the fact that it's a black cat that can control peoples bad luck since black cats are seen as unlucky to many. Also I like that he can see ghosts since cat's are known to see ghosts. What's a bit unclear is how there is non spoiled food in a abandoned apartment with ghosts, and how did the ghosts dissapear from the fight? And who exactly are the ghosts and are they gonna be friends with Omen now? One thing to improve Omens character is to give him a bit of a sympathetic background, or having some sort of backstory on why he just enjoys pranking people? It would make it easier to believe in that way that he could be friends with the ghosts. i'm still liking the story so far!

6

Week

Act 2: Omen vs the Spirits

I love the idea that a black cat can control peoples luck since black cats are very known for being bad luck. I also like the face that he can see ghosts since cats are also known to see ghosts. I think what's unclear is how the abandoned apartment has perfectly good food, maybe the ghosts made it? Also is the apartment abandoned because it's haunted? Also I'm confused on how the ghosts dissapeared from the fight. One suggestion I have to make Omen a more likable character is to give him a more sympathetic side where you see the reason why he's very hesitant to make any friends, because

5

Week

Act 1 - Aria

I like the story of the upcoming musician which is why I like gravitating towards small indie artists as they're more relatable and down to earth than any mainstream act. I'm wondering why the record label would turn her down when acts such as Billie Eilish and Lana Del Rey had very little star backing before they started, yet they became big on thier own. But seems like a good start to a story of another upcoming act of some sort, and I just wonder if Bruno is the one that's playing in a pub. I'm enjoying it thus far!

5

Week

Princess Alienor_Week 5

I like the idea for the story, kinda reminds me of the thoughts of a author of how they seem to have full control of a story and love the control. Kinda like the plot of that new movie Lost City, the main character is kinda like Sandra Bullock. And I like the angle where she gets transported in her own story like sort of Wizard of Oz style. I think whats kind of confusing or unclear is that I'm wondering if the book is magic on it's own the entire time or the magic just appeared when her insecurities or whoever wrote in the book made it magic. Who knows? And how did her locket dissapear? Guess we'll find out. Love what I'm seeing and hearing so far.

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