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Character Profile: PEDRO by Francisco González

This is so well thought out and a great tale to tell kids! Nothing was unclear and I honestly want to hear more about Pedro.

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What If assignment

I literally laughed when I saw the superheroes in couples counseling. The only thing I think is this is not much of a story, but maybe more of a short skit. For a full story, the snow globe idea has tons of promise! So many directions you could go with it. Does someone escape? Buildings get toppled over? Broken glass?

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Jalen - What If...

The first idea interests me the most! I wonder if the humans get special abilities or through evolution, they become different than earthly humans.

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"What If...." T.Sanchez

Great artwork! Really talented. Only suggestion, I had a hard time reading your words (not because of your handwriting, but because the paper is all scratched up). Maybe use a new untouched paper for each drawing – after all they are so good, you don't want them to get ruined by other drawings you make.

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I can't help but think of a chicken little who broke the sky! It's a fun idea and could go in a totally different direction than the other movie. I wonder if the children themselves would need to fix the sun, or if the government or their parents would take control of the issue?

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I loved your last what-if idea. It invites so many more what-ifs off of the initial idea. Also, AMAZING artwork – really talented!

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I love the choice of the apple to represent NYC and the fact it has color draws you in even more. Creative and fun!

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The amount of expression you fit into just a simple hand moving is impressive. I could really feel the voice behind the character just with the small movements.

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I loved the music you added, really made it feel like space. I was a tad confused why we started out looking at a star, but otherwise, this was a great story.

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