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Kara Final Video

masterpiece

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Gibby's full Story

nice music!

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Back To You

This is just beautiful!

7

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Earth's lament

This is cool, really love the artwork!

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The Lonely Fish: Rough Draft

I love this so much! The music definitely adds to the tension, great artwork, very cute! There was a long pause of silence(I thought it was frozen) near the end when Bate found someone that she could connect with, I'm assuming that is montage of how they developed their friendship, I hope you show us more of that, very excited!

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Act 1, Act 2 and part of Act 3.

This is amazing, great artwork! I wish I could see more visuals for how Viv fell in love with the surface i.e. the trees, land, the general beauty and difference between underwater and the surface etc.

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Kara

These visuals are absolutely beautiful! I love the color. Excited to see what comes next!

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The Lonely Fish: Acts 1 and 2

Aww bate!! she needs a hug! I can strangely relate to this character, and the way she paints a herself a self portrait reminds me of how lonely, suffering artists draw how they see themselves in that moment of their life. Wishing the best for Bate, she's lovely, she deserves the world<33

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Act 1and Act 2

omg the cliffhanger! excited to see what comes next!

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Character's World - STP.

Oh thank you! I think you might've missed the idea (that's entirely my fault tho, I should've added this in the description) but the characters live in a world where they can only see in one color except for the things they love. So colors are really important for me to add to tell this story. In this drawing, we're seeing the world in Vida's eyes that's why almost everything is in green, her color, and the main color she sees the world in. I hope this clarifies it, if you have more questions I'll be happy to answer them all :)

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Team Mitches Character in a Scene

I like the way you used perspective, really cool and interesting!

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Week 3 Drawing

I love it, it's giving Gotham city vibes!

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Brandon in the Sun

"Talented, brilliant, incredible, amazing, show-stopping, spectacular, never the same, totally unique..."

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Steph P. -Vida

I should've added this to the video, but they live in a simulation- the only way to beat it/live normally is to love(see colors) or see the world as we do. Vida figured this out(she doesn't know she lives in a simulation), she just has this belief that seeing a colorful world is how she can live her life to the fullest. There are other ways to live of course, some of the potential characters I see in this world are more comfortable seeing the main color they can see in, they may know how to see colors/or love, they just chose not to because, maybe they had bad experiences that withdrew them from loving/wanting to see (diff.)colors? Anyways, sorry I'm rambling, but thank you! - this is also for those who needed a little clarification! plz ask more questions if you have any :)

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Raphael’s Character Profile

so cute <33

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Shock and Mars

Looks very much like Haku from spirited away, might wanna rethink! Otherwise, nice drawings<33

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Character Profile

Jesus cute<3 what Tyler said.

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What If... Apocalyptic Scenarios?

These are all great, very specific. exciting!

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What if...

I like the buffalo one I think it's quite funny

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Team underdog what if

These are great, but I would elaborate more on the alien idea, there are many alien ideas out there and I think you can come up with a brilliant one. :)

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