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what if.. elevator monsters, forever trash, death not guaranteed

Hi Daisymobile,

We really liked your ideas. Our favourite was your third one. It's a what if that opens so many possibilities, and can create a mystical world where humans live forever, or a world where only a certain thing could kill humans, or go completely dark where all humans die from murder or freak accidents.

It makes us wonder what direction you'll take this. If humans don't die naturally, how do they die? In this world, do they end up living longer or shorter lives that we have now. How does knowing that humans don't die naturally change the way humans live?

What is a little unclear is the significance of your artwork, would love to understand what you're depicting better.

- Jaime and Nix

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Week 1 Deliverable

Hi Giant Child,

I loved your second idea. It speaks to a truth about life... We often have to do what we don't want to/ don't feel like doing to achieve the things we want in life. So while you can take this in a really creative direction, you'll leave your audience with a lesson applicable to their lives.

It makes me wonder why the thing they hated the most is what they need. What is it that they hate and how did they grow to hate it?

I'm unclear on if this something only one main character would experience or something everyone in their world eventually discovers.

- Jaime and Nix

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What if teasers

My favorite idea was the third one. It offers the possibility of allowing people's dreams come true in a fantastical way, but also could cause deep anxiety and regret.

It makes me wonder how this choice changes childhood. Are the fun and play left for after age 18, while childhood is filled with hard work and diligence to make the right choice.

What was unclear to me is how you receive the life that you want? Do you just magically step into it, or do you grow into it but with obstacles cleared out of your way?

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What Ifs by Los Diablicos

My favorite idea was the cat on fire. Its an unexpected idea and the what if is open to going in many directions: comedy, tragedy, horror.

It makes me wonder why the cat bursts into fire? How did it start and what's the greater purpose?

What's unclear is if it's painful for the cat, if it returns to original form and how the fires impact the environment it's in.

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