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Sebas and Mau

Hi Team Blue Pearls! I really love this concept, and that it’s framed through Sebas’ eyes! I’m the second of five siblings so the frustration is real!
I wonder how Sebas came to love baking, is it due to a specific experience?
its unclear if his father is in the picture, how could that relationship tie into how the boys treat one another?
I wonder what’s up with the mom, she seems to try and force a relationship rather than mediate interactions knowing how Sebas can react to Mau. It doesn’t seem fair to either boy. Do we learn more about how she interacts with the boys?
I wonder if Mau will find something he loves and if Sebas may find himself wanting to join in…
Thanks for sharing!

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Character Profile – Poe

This is a great concept Tuesday Matinee! I like how Poe’s arcs are clear and easy to understand. Will we learn more about his childhood and the evil ghost who haunted him? I’m curious to see that framed against his partner Ellen & Yuri’s relationship.
I wonder how Poe’s career ties into the story as well. Will it relate to anything supernatural or be at the furthest spectrum because of Poe’s past?
I also wonder how Poe and Ellen met. It seems like he really adores her :)

Thanks for sharing!

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Meet Kyota & Adrian

This is a really cool concept! I wonder if there will be situations in which Adrian’s timid nature or skillset benefits Kyoto in a tense or complex situation. I see there being room for growth in both characters!
How does the world react to people like Kyoto? Are skypirates respected in some circles or are they all seen as criminals?
Could they be treated more like bounty hunters? Walking a fine line and moral gray areas, rather than being one step from the Guillotine.
I wonder where their common ground lies. It seems like they both could come to respect one another after learning more about who they have become.
Excited to see/hear more from you!

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Character Profile - Tagan

HI Team Juh, I really like this character dive on Tagan! She seems smooth and cool, and has a kinda unapproachable vibe.
I’m wondering why does Tagan feel so strongly about helping her ghost friend get it together? Does it tie to any of her personal experiences or traumas? I wonder if she’s the only one who can talk to spirits or is it a family/lineage skill that needs to be cultivated?
I think that it’s beautiful that she’s learning to be vulnerable, I see it as being an awesome breakthrough. Would this vulnerability and sharing of her feelings manifest its self in different ways in her living world affairs? To her benefit or detriment?
Will her ghost friend help Tagan out or feel put off by how much she’s meddling?
Very excited to see where this goes! Thank you for sharing :)

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