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Baked Back Together

This is probably one of my favorite films yet! I'm so amazed at the production quality, art, and your storytelling capabilities especially. The concept was great to begin with, and this film just sells it. Congrats on completing this amazing film!

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Pepi ii

I can't get over how great this concept is!! Your shot composition and stellar, and so is your narration. Congratulations!

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Hannah's Story Reel

Your art style is amazing!! Your lines are so clean and I love how you drew the characters. I also love the story, and it has great potential to become a full length feature

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Not Your Everyday Ghost Story

The story is very clear, and the music really pushes the narrative! The conflict was also engaging. Really kept me at the edge of my seat

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Earth's lament

Incredible animation and storytelling! Your masterful shot compositions are so effective in telling the story

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Hunter

Nice backstory! However, I would improve on the narration. Overall, I love the characterization

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Lewis and his Magic Kite

Nice choice of music! It really sets the mood. The concept is nice as well

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helping others

The audio and visuals could be improved on. Other than that, nice video

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final cowspiracy

Hilarious concept! Love this, especially the unexpected turn of events. The audio could be improved on, but other than that, great video

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Final project

Love the narration and concept!

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Earth's lament

Your music and editing is topnotch! This animatic exudes professionalism, and I love the voice acting!! Overall a great viewing experience

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Pepi II act one

Your sketches and narration are absolutely amazing! Your story is super clear and I love the twist of the mummy waking up. Such a smooth flow of events

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Pepi III

I love the artwork! Keep up the great work

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Kara

I can really connect to this story. It is easy to get lost in your future and lose touch of what you have at the present. The flow of events really conveys this message, and I can't wait to see how your final product is!

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Lulus adventure

Love the historical aspect of this story! And it made me really sad for lulu's situation. I wonder how this story connects to the moral of finding your own path though, especially since Lulu's problems were caused by following her own path

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Storyline

I love the indigenous angle to this story! I think this is an important story to tell

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Austin's Story Spine TW: Suicide

Love how much heart your story has. I feel like a lot of people could relate to it. I also love how you used color to tell the story

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Da Kine

The voice acting adds a great touch to the video! So much character is emulated

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Outline for the story “The Reptilian Vampire”

Your voiceover is great and your storytelling style is so unique! It would be nice to see pictures to accompany the story beats

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Fynn’s Story Spine

Love the framing and art style! Your story is also really interesting

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Ted's Story Spine

I can really connect with this story! Love how the moral played out

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Video about slavery

Great setup! I wonder how she losrt her friend. In what sense was she lost? Also, I wonder what bullying has to do with slavery in this context?

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Earth's lament

I LOVEEE THE DRAWING SO MUCH! Your storytelling skills are so good and I love how you use parallax to give an illusion of atmospheric depth

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Our Story Spine

Your storytelling is so unique! I really love your ideas and presentation. Can't wait to see what you have to offer!

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PO’s World

Love your use of shape and color!

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