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I like the the shading and lines.I was confused on where he was. You could maybe add like a town name.
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Character profile
I like your idea for the story. A suggestion is that you could have more information about his family and their life.
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Gold rush
I like the idea of the storyline. The part about how to gold mine collapsed was unclear. A suggestion is that you could about information about his family
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What if...
I really liked the idea of the Oregon trail. I wonder how the bison would hold the bow.
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