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video

I like your drawings

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Ahmik

You had a good idea

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Gold rush

I like how loud you were

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Trail of tears

I like the drawings and storyline

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Act 1&2

I like your story

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Gold Rush

I like the story line and drawings maybe talk a little clearer

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Gold Rush

The drawings are so cool

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Act 2

I like your story

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Cowboys

I like the deer

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Gold Rush

I like the drawing they are really detailed. I also like the story line

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Week 5 video

Talk louder in some of the clips

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Marcus Whitman storyboarding

I like your idea for the story. And your drawings.

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Week 5

Try to make it so it dont move away from the picture

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Gold Rush

I like the story idea.

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Cowboys

I like the idea

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Week Three Deliverable

I like the coloring.

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Brandon in the Sun

I like the shad form the mountain

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Week 3

I like the the shading and lines.I was confused on where he was. You could maybe add like a town name.

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Where is my home?

I like the shading

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Lily's world

I like the color

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Character profile

I like your idea for the story. A suggestion is that you could have more information about his family and their life.

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Gold rush

I like the idea of the storyline. The part about how to gold mine collapsed was unclear. A suggestion is that you could about information about his family

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What if...

I really liked the idea of the Oregon trail. I wonder how the bison would hold the bow.

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