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Pixar full story reel

This was a good story. There were pieces that were a bit unclear like who is Ash? Interesting plot, has a resolution.

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Lil nee act 3

We want to know more about Lil Nee. We liked the art work. There isn't a resolution in the story yet but looking forward to that piece!

7

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Story Reel 3

We liked the artwork. Some of the details of the story felt like they were missing. Would love more details.

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Roommates Act I

The art is so impressive. I like some of the extra details like how you added the poster in the background of the job interview

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Team 2

I like your story. I am curious about where Jack is driving from? Does anything good happen to Jack on the trip? IT seems like one bad thing after the other!

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Act 1

I liked learning that Nathan is really into video games. I am curious what will happen now that Nathan has only 3 lives. How will he realize it? Does the whole world around him start looking more like a video game? Is this real or has Nathan just played too many video games and has lost track of reality?

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Act 1 minor beat

I really like the style of the art. I am drawn to the story and want to know what comes next!

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Week 5

I am impressed by the animation of this video but I didn't get much of a story from it. I would suggest following the once upon a time format to introduce the viewer to your characters and the story you want to tell.

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Flora the witch!

I liked the witch character who is happy go lucky and her cat Fauna. I wonder how they knew that the rarest mushrooms were deep in the forrest? I wonder if Fauna's great sense of smell led the witch down the scary forrest.

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Grandma

It sounds like a sad story because in the end she has to leave the cat in the underworld.

We really liked the art and that the grandma was willing to take such a big journey for a cat.
The plot seems complicated and it might make for a really long video that is hard to follow.

We are curious about the cat's personality. We want to know more about the cat and how they are best friends. Simplifying the story would make more room for the character development of the cat.

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