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What if teaser

Great job with these ideas! I really enjoyed the first idea, which could be an entire sequence of finding this jewel. I was curious about why this jewel was so important and what made it the most important jewel in the world. I thought that the second was also cool, and was wondering how the animals would be affected by the music. Great work with this!

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A friend in need is a friend indeed

These are some interesting ideas! I liked the first idea, but I was wondering what was their motivation for killing their friend? Do they feel any remorse for it? Does the killed friend manifest himself in any way? I also liked the other two ideas, and was wondering how would this change their everyday lives? Good work!

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Andrew, Cecil, Jacob and Oliver's "What If?"

Wow, these are some good ideas! I really like the first idea, and was curious to how these giant animals would change everyday life. I also really liked the song idea, and was wondering how music would change reality. Do different genres of songs change reality in certain ways? Do the songs need to be played out loud or can they change reality just through someone listening through headphones? Great job with this!

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Our team's What If's

I really liked these ideas! The first idea seemed to the most compelling to me. It would be really cool to see what was so amazing about life in the Bermuda Triangle, and how people chose that life over returning to their families and the world. What makes the Bermuda Triangle so special if people stay there on their own free will? I also thought that the man being turned into a rat was a funny idea, and it would be fun to see how he ultimately learns to love rats. Great work!

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What If... - Rushmi Singh

Wow, these were some great ideas! I thought that all of these were very interesting, especially the first and third ones. I just had some questions about how these ideas would work. For the first idea, how do the two people know they are isolated? Is everyone else in the world just living normally? How did this happen? And for the second idea, I think it would be really interesting to have the magician give up on his magic, which he knows isn't real magic, only to be told that it is real magic. I really like these ideas, and am excited to see where you take them next!

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What Ifs

Hey, nice job with these! I found the third one to be the most compelling story out of the bunch. I was wondering how the girl felt about giving powers to others but never getting one of her own, does that make her feel jealous or frustrated? I was also curious about the rover idea, since how would things change if there was never a rover on Mars? Also, for the second one, are the dogs the beings and charge and the humans are just the pets? Are humans unhappy with their current status as pets? Overall, I think these were some great ideas and I'm excited to see where you take it!

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