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Act 1-3

I like the detail in the drawings. The story is very interesting. You could have less background noise.

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Act 3

The drawings are very good. Good volume and expression throughout.

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Week seven story board about slavery

I like the variety of pictures and volume.

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Week 7

This does not have much to do from history. Have less background noise.

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Act 1, 2, & 3

The volume was good throughout.

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Week 7

I like the story idea. You could have better volume and talk a bit slower.

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Ryan

Keep the volume consistent. You could use more expression. I like the drawings.

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Oregon Trail

If you read slower it would be easier to comprehend the story. I like the drawings, they are easy to understand.

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Trail of tears

I like the details in the story and the pictures. Some parts you can’t hear very well. I don’t really understand what the characters wants and needs are.

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Ahmik

I like the storyline. The pictures were easy to understand. They are called tepees not tents, just change that.

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Act 3

There is no storyline. If you could add more detail to your pictures it would help.

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4

There should be more detail and clearer voices.

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Act 1, 2, 3

I like the different types of drawings and their angles. You could have less background noise and be clearer when talking.

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Act 1&2

I like the drawings. Maybe try to have less background noise.

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Oregon trail

good story. I could clearly hear you.

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Joeʻs Act 1

I like the way you read and explained the story.

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Act 1 Storyreel for Luna

great details and detailed drawings.

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Act 1 - Stella

I think this will be a great story. I think there should have been more details included in this video.

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Marcus Whitman storyboarding

if you could make it so the pictures stay still, that would help your video. Otherwise it is good.

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Oregon Trail

I like the story idea. I think there could be more detail in the drawings.

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Week 4 story spine

I like the idea of the story. I think that if you took more time to think about all the details the story would come together very nicely.

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Rock Man Adventures

I like the idea. There was good volume and the story made sense.

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Our Image Thing

The city is very detailed. I love how the dog is happy looking.

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The Tiny Person Behind the Wall Socket

I don’t know what’s going on but I love the drawing. I assume that he is a factory worker and gets very lonely. I assume that he is tired of working there. The detail is very nice.

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Greenhouse

The drawing is very detailed. I like the different shading.

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