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Final Video

I like the drawings but the explanation of the story could use improvement

8

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James and Kyle

Love the drawings and moral of the story!

8

Week

A girl who got cursed to cause an earthquake everytime she speaks

The slides were very fast and I'm not 100% sure your story connects with the moral but it has potential

8

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Impending Death

Love the concept and love the art!

8

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3

I like the general concept but I am a little confused about the story

7

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Turtle Journey, Act 1, Act 2, Act 3

The drawing of the turtle/rat and the scenes are very nice.

7

Week

The Story of a Reptilian Vampire

Love the design of the crocodile and the description of him.

7

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Lil nee act 3

I love the duck character.

7

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Cora, Friendship and Accepting Your Past

Interesting concept & story, the art style is nice too

7

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Lenta and Nix acts 1-3

Interesting story. Love the wolf & rabbit drawings.

6

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Lewis and his Kite

The story seems interesting so far

6

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Kara

The story seems interesting with viewing possible futures and your art style is awesome!

6

Week

Act 1+2 storyreel.

Nice drawings, are those hand drawn elements that are incorporated in them?

5

Week

Add a Title

Love the different shots, even without a voice over its simple to follow whats happening.

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5

Week

The Story of a Cool Colored Vampire

Love the design of the crocodile

4

Week

Story Plot Sketching

Awesome art. Story seems very similar to reality w/ social media, good lessons to teach about it

4

Week

Story Spine

I love the art style of the characters and the story of a jealous ghost also seems interesting

3

Week

Danylo's world.

Awesome looking world. Love the art style

3

Week

Fragmented Worlds (OMG)

Cool looking drawing & your 3rd teammate is back

3

Week

Their World

The drawing seems interesting but also confusing. What is the purple on the right side?

2

Week

Ferris and Gordon from Rust and Go

Yes, it is awesome gopher.

2

Week

video! week 2!

What is happening, is this a save point?

2

Week

Count Crocula

Interesting names and story, but are there typical vampires?

2

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Week 2 Penguin Idea

The penguin looks great, love the tie and suitcase. Interesting story idea.

2

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Raphael’s Character Profile

The turtle looks awesome and the story seems interesting :)

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