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Spaceship Boy Act 1/2

I meant to say "But I loved your story" at the end.

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Spaceship Boy Act 1/2

I can say I have never seen this before. That is a good thing! because it is something new. But I loved it your story.

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Fighting the Light

This was an interesting story talking about how a boy liked the light. I kind of want to know what will happen next.

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Greens world

I enjoyed seeing your story. I thought it was very creative.

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Act 2!

I loved the plotline. I saw a lot of emotion in your artwork.

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Roommates Act 1 & 2

The pictures were well made. Great work!

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Act 1 & 2

I can tell you worked hard on the story of your topic. Nice work!

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Tyche's World

Like the story, I enjoyed seeing the pictures you worked hard on.

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Taima

I enjoyed how you wanted to make a chicken control the weather. I thought that was something I have not seen yet.
I guess the names are a little confusing, I mean they are good. It adds to the topic of the story.
Maybe add more characters that are not chickens that also have powers like the chickens.

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A friend in need is a friend indeed

I enjoyed "what if my friend was a robot." It makes you wonder if there is only one robot out there or there are more like your friend. Maybe include how you find out he is a robot, or how he became that. In the end, all of the ideas were good.

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what if?

The first idea about the ghost was cool. I felt like I wanted to hear more about that story. I could understand the mission you gave. Maybe add to the idea that they go on a world tour or something like that.

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What if...

I liked the Goldrush idea. Like what if there were not gold? Would anyone go to California for fake news? Who knows, but you could add more to the story to make it intriguing. Like where did all of the Gold go? Besides that it was good.

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WHAT IF...

The ideas were a cool way to look at things from a different perspective. I was able to understand your ideas. It was clear to hear and I got the topic.

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Laura, DJ, and Addie's What if statements

I liked the idea of the man going on his last adventures with his wife. Would the man time travel into the past or future? Or travel into a different timeline? If you do this idea maybe make the man travel into different worlds for his last adventure as well as places that are new.

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Laura, DJ, and Addie's What if statements

I liked the first idea with the man about to die but then going on an adventure with his wife. Would this be called time trivial or a different timeline that the old man trivials into? If you do pick this idea maybe make the man do these last adventures in different worlds as well as places.

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