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Final project

I love the story and think it works well

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The Life of the Spider in the Corner

I think this could use more of a story

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Gold rush

I think the audio could use some change, because the narration is not in certain parts of the story which takes away from the story

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Week 8 = Cactus

I love the story, and even though there is no narration, the pictures are well made and tell the story

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Ahmik

I like the storytelling, but there are some things that dont make sense, like how they killed a buffalo for food, but went looking for food the next day even though they killed a buffalo.

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princess is back

The music kind of makes it hard to hear what you are saying

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Week 7

I think some of the events are really random, and many events don't make sense, or just feel out of place.

7

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Night Light Storyreel

I think the story is good but I was wondering how they got out of the jar.

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Ryan

I think the plot needs more emotion, maybe the characters could have some sort of disagreement. I also think the there should be more variety in the type of things that happen, all the events seem very similar.

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The War

I think that the story is creative, but it doesn't seem complete, I think its missing an act

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Lewis and his Kite

I think the story is really good, and am excited for act three

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Fighting the Light

Why is he bullied for liking light?

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Act 1 and 2

I think that the characters are compelling but why do they get called a freak for having a shadow.

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rock man opening acts

I like the story at the start, but I think the plot could have more of a driving purpose or conflict.

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Act 1 and 2

I think you did a very good job at making people feel empathy for the characters, but I think the ghost idea could be elaborated upon.

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Alexis being turned into a demon

I think that the drawing and feeling of the scene is good, but i don't know if their reason for killing Alexis is valid

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Curse of Luigi board

I like the photo, but I think you should use drawing to better convey the feeling of the scene

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Flavio Vacazinha in the New world

I like the facial expressions of the characters and I can easily tell how this scene is supposed to feel, although I do think you could use perspective more.

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Xiao Fe

Its kind of hard to tell the feeling of this area and its importance to the character, if this area is important.

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Week 3 drawing

I cant really tell what type of character this is, and the feeling of the surrounding area

3

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Home and City of Asmund

I like the shape of the buildings, but its hard to tell the feeling of this town

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Week 2

so he can get what he wants

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Character Profile: John Sniffer

I like the character, but i think you could elaborate on the part where he is separated from his family.

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Derek Character

What does derek want?

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Character Profile

I think the conflict should be improved upon, but the character is good outside of that.

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