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Week
Ryan
Like how there traped
Like how they did it together
Fix the audio
Less background noise
7
Week
Oregon Trail
Nice that they fixed the wagon by them self
Like how they had a journey
What made the wagon brake
Why was that person in the mountains
7
Week
Trail of tears
Like the story
Drawing are good
Speak clearer
Where did they get the money for the village
7
Week
Ahmik
I like the buffalo because they died back then
I like how he used faked gold
How did he’s parent die
How is he getting fake gold
7
Week
Act 1, 2, 3
Nice story like the idea of them not letting them marry. but why were they going to Idaho. Put a reason for that
6
Week
Stella Act 1 and Act 2
Nice details and nice animation like the idea. But make her relation better with the bear
5
Week
Act 1 Storyreel
I like the idea of a different character of the firefly. Very good description.
5
Week
A Mysterious Mirror
I really like how the phone and mirror raised questions but I would prefer you talk
5
Week
The Story of a Cool Colored Vampire
Nice setup to follow up act 2 good catch I want to know what happen next
3
Week
Shock in Color
I like the idea of plant taking over but what would be the character in it would it be the dragon
3
Week
Neth in her world
Love the drawing like how detail it is maybe you could add how she can see gohst
3
Week
Mushroom cave
I love the glowing effect and the great drawing you could maybe make water dripping from the ceiling for a Eire effect
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