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Act 1-3

Nice details
Nice pictures
How did he fall in river
Talk louder

7

Week

Act 3

Like the story
Good audio
Talk clearer

7

Week

Act 1, 2, & 3

Like the story
Like the moral
Moral for act 4
Better audio

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Week 7

Like story
Like drawing
Talk louder
Better audio

7

Week

Ryan

Like how there traped
Like how they did it together
Fix the audio
Less background noise

7

Week

Oregon Trail

Nice that they fixed the wagon by them self
Like how they had a journey
What made the wagon brake
Why was that person in the mountains

7

Week

Trail of tears

Like the story
Drawing are good
Speak clearer
Where did they get the money for the village

7

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Ahmik

I like the buffalo because they died back then
I like how he used faked gold
How did he’s parent die
How is he getting fake gold

7

Week

Act 3

Like story
Nice images
Talk more clear
Bring it Manifest destiny

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Week

4

Need something about manifest destiny
Nice story otherwise
Speak clear
Check spelling

7

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Act 1, 2, 3

Nice story like the idea of them not letting them marry. but why were they going to Idaho. Put a reason for that

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Week

Stella Act 1 and Act 2

Nice details and nice animation like the idea. But make her relation better with the bear

6

Week

Jonathon Q. Sniffer; Act 1 and 2

I like it very funny made me laugh and good idea

6

Week

Hunter

I like the idea and how it’s explained very well

5

Week

Act 1 Storyreel

I like the idea of a different character of the firefly. Very good description.

5

Week

Gibby's story: Act 1

I love the idea of the story I love the idea of the character

5

Week

A Mysterious Mirror

I really like how the phone and mirror raised questions but I would prefer you talk

5

Week

lil nee

I like how act one is leading to the rest of the story

5

Week

The Story of a Cool Colored Vampire

Nice setup to follow up act 2 good catch I want to know what happen next

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Week

Week 4 story spine

I like the plot and story but think of more details

4

Week

story spine

I like the idea but is there more story on how she found her mom

4

Week

STory SPine

I like the idea and I really like the moral

3

Week

Shock in Color

I like the idea of plant taking over but what would be the character in it would it be the dragon

3

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Neth in her world

Love the drawing like how detail it is maybe you could add how she can see gohst

3

Week

Mushroom cave

I love the glowing effect and the great drawing you could maybe make water dripping from the ceiling for a Eire effect

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