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Tyche

Loved the art and music!!

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Earth's lament

Love it.great in every way.

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My Story

I liked the story spine. The idea is unique. I love the idea of a town that thinks everything is ok when it’s not! The art was good. Maybe a little but of letting the pictures telling the story instead of narration would have been nice. I like the fact that the couple got their baby.

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flower roseʻ

I like your drawing. The story sounds like it will be good. I think you need to expand on how she will get to the top. Maybe her seeds wil travel with a bird?

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Way Home- full storyreel

Wow. I loved your story throughout the entire play from beginning to end. My 6 year old loved the character (a cat like humanoid creature). The drawings were clear and animated. Your voice over was flawless. The story spine was great. The music was just enough not bring too loud. The ending was great. Just love this.

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Week 8 coraline hetrick

I liked the story. I love her name. I think a bit of dialogue or more narration might have made the plot a bit more clear. The moral is a good one.

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Lewis and his Magic Kite

This story has a strong story spine. It makes you hopeful for the boy and that his situation will change. I love the moral. It was very clear though a bit short. I think the third act could have been a bit longer.

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