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Porcelain bird

Hi Manuela,

Thank you so much!

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Porcelain bird

Thank you ☺

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Lost and Found

Hey,
I enjoyed your story reel and how it turned. And can I suggest to you one thing that the father's job was to write an article about the lost and found city. So he accidentally spent too much time and got lost in it. The daughter, at her tern age, starts to investigate her dad's disappearance and finds the city. So they do not knowingly together on a search through the city. Time is almost up, the girl sits and cries helplessly. And tells one last story that she remembers which is about her dad. At this moment the pencil realizes that she was looking for her all this time. How about this?
So good luck with your future projects! And best of luck!

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Porcelain bird

Hi Mededith,

Thank you so much!

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Porcelain bird

Hi Armando,
Thank you!

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Not all Shells sound like the Ocean

Well done! And good luck!

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Majestic Story Reel

I love your story and little sad atmosphere. Your drawings are lovely. I hope for the majestic true re-recognition soon!

Good luck with your future projects!

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Porcelain bird

Thank you so much! Thank you for your praise! I did enjoy your story too!

Good luck with your future projects!

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Porcelain bird

Aww 😍🤩 thank you! You're charming in every way!

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The Antique Store

Nice! I am happy in the end the main character has turned into her cheerful self.

Good job!

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A Pirate's Treasure

Excellent! Riveting! Just seems to me, that needed to be added more sound or music to increase the intensity of the story.
Good luck with your future projects!

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Alien Reality Show

Riveting! I enjoyed your story reel so much!

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BILLIE'S RITUAL

I really enjoyed your story. Great job!

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BOREALIS - Final Cut

😍🤩🤤 AWWW, how adorable! Love everything about your story.

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The Dream Seller

Great original story! I think it will be reasonable, in the end, if he teaches the people how to fight their dark dreams and do it together.
I really enjoyed your story reel. Well done!

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Gravity

Hey, your story is so touching! Enjoyed it so much!

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Eternal Jade

I love your story. Well done!

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The Little Apprentice - a rough draft

Wow, a divorced, father sorcerer? That is one brand new character! I enjoyed your story and the drawings so much!
Good job! 🎱

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Skyfellers: Tales from Chusetts' Ranch

Hi, I love your story. And the drawings! So adorable!
Good job and good luck!

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Wolf and Dragon

Oh, come on! 😋 It's too cool! 😍🤩🤤

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Walk In My Shoes

Hi Julia,

So emotional! I loved the ending where they found peace in their minds.
Good job!

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Porcelain bird

Hi Julia,

Thank you so much, from my drawing experience I understood that fundament of visual storytelling is composition. Which is what I dream of to master.

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Forest people

Hi Ryan,
I like your idea. But can I suggest a few? Can you read it out on your story reel? And can you name the characters? Because it is a little hard to follow up on your story by reading.

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Toro

Good job, guys! Bravo! Bravo!

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Porcelain bird

Hi Desiree,

Thanks, when I filled out the team's name I did not realize the name would appear on the submission. Oops, so kept it this way. 🙃

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