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Lucid (unfinished)

I like this story idea and the facial expressions of the characters were engaging and funny!

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The Newlydeads

I loved the art and story! It was very engaging and the wedding officiant was hilarious.

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Hannah's Story Reel

I loved your story and the art was very well drawn and engaging!

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Cora and the Hourglass

I love the art and the way the characters are drawn, super cute! The story was very interesting and well developed.

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Cloud Surfing

I loved how the character was super developed and clear. The idea of wave surfing was exciting and I liked seeing it drawn out.

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The Little Red Flower

I love the story! From begging to end the characters were creative and the story was interesting. My favorite part was when the plant grew feelings for the girl and got upset when the boy got too close.

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what if

I love the last idea! It makes me wonder how many pets does this boy make into origami and does he save other people's petʻs souls by putting them into origami?

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what if

I love the robot idea! Id love to see your story get into how they robot was created and its day to day life as a detective!

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Lol protector

I love this idea! It makes me wonder: does the bird have a secret form that it can turn into? and does the main character face daily challenges or do they fight evil with their bird protector?

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what if...

I love the second idea about the trees telling stories! This makes me wonder: would the story follow the life of the tree or would the main character talk to different trees?

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what if?

I love your first idea! I imagine that the ghosts would learn more that they didnʻt get to in their lifetime.

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What if... week 1 assignment

I loved all your ideas! I specifically liked the first one about the cat. It makes me think of what the surroundings of the planet would look like!

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