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Stella

Great story! I like how Stella keeps meeting new characters.

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Not Your Everyday Ghost Story

Nice story! I like the idea of this story!

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Achromatic World

Great story! I like the drawings! Great ending!

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Earth's lament

Great drawings! Super great plot! This story is great.

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Flora and Fauna

Great job on your drawings. I really like the plot and the story itself, but maybe have the character talk more so it’s not just narration.

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Ana, Andrea, Walker, Donivan

Um okay story. So he just died. Um sure that’s a great ending. But good pictures and volume.

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Act 1 2 and 3

How is her family gonna live without gold to by food.

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Ryan

Fix pictures and volume. Make is so it’s not like someone speaks super small and then the next person blasts through the mic. Speak away from in.

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Lulus Adventure

It was good just take better pictures but it was a good story.

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Golden dream

Good job. It was a great story. It was good that only one person talked. It makes a better story that way. You could change a few things but it’s a good story.

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4

I like the sound. The story was set up good. Why was he looking for his family? Why are they away from him? But good story and maybe work on the drawings a bit.

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Act 1, 2, 3

I was a good story. I like how there was no background sounds. The picture were really good. I like the way the story was set up. I wonder why he say a native women? What does that mean?

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Ahmik

His parents actually died from the pilgrims. Sorry we didn’t say that. But thanks for the comment.

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A Mysterious Mirror

Um good story but can you say and not just take a picture to speed through it just to get it done

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Jonathon Q. Sniffer: Story Spine.

Is this the whole story or just the first three acts? Anyways it was a great story!

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Earth's lament

This story seems super professional! I can’t wait to see what happens next!

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Story board on slavery

I hope her friend stays her friend. Nice plot so far.

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Act 1

Nice story so far.

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lil nee

Great plot! It sets up for a great story!

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Dream Factory. Part 1.

Maybe make some pictures that show but don’t say. But other than that great plot!

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Week 3

It’s hard to understand

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Gummi Land

Really nice drawings. How did you even make this?

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Character in Scenery

Try harder

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Cowboy Coby

I can’t really see much of a plot here but I guess it’s still in development. Good luck on your story!

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Week 3 drawing

I like it the shade is cool

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