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SMOKE ME

Thanks AJ!

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Lenny and the Song of the Forest

Great work! Everything is clear and as different weeks, it is such a moving story.

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Grandfather Story Reel

I had so much fun watching the whole process of yours. Everything is clear. Congrats!

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Wolf and Dragon

It was super cool watching the whole process. And the drawings are incredible. Everything is clear!! Congrats!

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Love and Death Full Final

I’m glad I found you again after the whole process. It is a very powerful story and interesting. Very well done. Things are clear and the characters are amazing

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Por las barbas de mi gato - My Cat´s whiskers

I found very interesting that freaky Friday aspect of the characters.

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Toro

The Visuals look so good! It was great to see the whole process. Very good, I'm amazed by the final product.

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Rugula's Voice

I think it is a very interesting third act on how it all changes between the characters. Also being a story inside the movie industry is interesting and you can really see the change, the positive change that the unexpected meeting had between the two parties. It is also a very creative way of reminding the audience to talk with people that you might even have different opinions, you can really change and evolve.

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GRANDFATHER - ROUGH STORY REEL

As always beautiful drawings and very easy to follow the story. The brief encounter of t he grandfather and the boy at the hospital is powerful. Also the whole part of the hankershif is a very nice "Cherkovs gun", you show it and it is important, even crucial for the whole story. Great work! I really connected with the story and I think is clear with a great pase.

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+act 3

Great drawings! I felt it still was easy to follow what was going on. Also it is a happy ending, which is good and with a realization that they both ended up having something that they wanted.

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Act 1, 2, 3 Storyreel

Very good story. I have been following the process and it is very good, the third act is very inspiring. It is simple and helps the character to really evolve. Also the drawings are always so good. Great work!

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Croxi - Act 1, 2 and 3

I like you intension of showing everything just with drawings, and it is very clear the whole process. I really enjoy the third act, on the importance of the picture of the family, it is something small but with a lot of power between the two characters. Also the part of the water getting back was really cool. Also it is a different pirate tale, and it is very clear story wise.

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Lenny and the Song of the Forest

I liked the third act, how the drone from the very first act was then important to connect to with everybody and the "revival" of the forest. I like how It is al part of the same story and it doesn't feel like something is extra you know, like it is a very well constructed story.

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Rugula's Passion

I love Rugula and her design. A Monsters Inc but more mature in the way of there is a more complicated relationship of humans and monsters. How does the human appear there? For Rugula being a monster it feels so human how she acts which is good. I really liked the story.

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LENNY & TWIRL

It is a very actual story, I love it! The metaphor of disconnecting is so powerful. Common but in your story doesn't feel "common" it is a very good story. And really makes you wat to know more. The scene of the "nightmare" was so good, as a key moment to change the story. And I also liked that the kids were able to join the adventure of saving the tree.
And your cliffhanger!! Very good act 2, I was like I want to know more!

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Sheldon takes Flight Acts1 and 2

It is a very funny story that people can connect with the idea of a Penguin wanting to fly. Sheldon looks cool, he is the rebel who will do everything to achieve his goal. I just fell there is something more you need, like you're ending short for act 2. Because he hasn't eve donde anything in the way of action, he just went out of the school but he hasn't tried to fly yet. I think you can play with that idea, of him getting out and starting to "practice" on his own, having a sequence of him doing something.

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Act 1 & 2 Storyreel

Im a fan of Toro, I really like his heroes journey. Also yours drawings are so cool. Specially the part of Toro being in the first act and the humans playing with him was a good first act addition. Everything is clear an the end of act omg, it was so good, I like the words of wisdom of Hermit.

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Croxi - Act 1 and 2

Very good job. I liked your idea of not using audio in the sense of just focusing on the drawings. Because I have been following your process I was able to better understand it. Every drawing of yours amazed me, it really helps you to understand the whole story. I also like how the chemistry between Captain and Briar and how mature Briar looks at the end of act 2.

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Wolf and Dragon- Act 1 & 2- Kayla Stith

I love it! Seeing the whole process has been so amazing. WOW! How lobo explained Pitaya they are family was ver powerful. Very simple but extremely easy to understand. Also the beats of the story felt really good, there is not a boring moment and really keeps you into the story. Everything is very clear and beautiful drawings.

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Act 1 & 2 Storyreel

I think it is a very likable story that people can relate to. I just have some back story question on if it is a magical world or a normal with just this little bi of magic?
But after that I felt it is a very funny story of hunting down spirits and how dancing has a very big part on the story. I don't know if having some conflict between your main character and the spirit companion can help to make it more impactful.

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Marin-Act 1

What a great story for Marin. The end of the act one is great! It really kept me excited to know more and see how the whole story would evolve.Also the backstory on how Marin came into the current situation was really interesting without plot holes or questions.

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ELIXIR - ACT ONE

Hi Francisco, it was a really good act 1. It feels like a lot but in a good way. There is the prelude of the story which I found it very interesting and then there is the part of getting Pedro and his father into more mundane life situation Wich is good. I really like that the act 1 Finnishes right before the big adventure.

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Une Masquerade Ridicule - Act 1

IT feels like a very good first act in the way of getting the characters straight and how they are. Also the way you are narrating and the drawing wow it really add up to the story. very well done

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Worked Like A Dog - ACT 1

Collie is such a great character, and your first act is super good, it really helps to get to know her and to start to understand what is she doing. It is all very clear and I think it is a great moment to get to known Collie

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Leo´s Act 1

Im so excited by the giants part, there is a big prelude there. Also how Leo keeps all that time of being an explorer and how he became a little bit reckless is interesting and those decisions he made make him connect with the end of act 1. SO I think it is a very well thought act 1 with important story elements presented

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