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Week

A Stellar Bedtime Story

Congratulations to your team! I really enjoy your team’s story idea and art style. We read to our little one, and I love the idea of the story getting carried away. It reminds me of the story Goodnight Opus by Berkeley Breathed. :) I can’t wait to see your finished story reel!

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Week

Majestic Story Reel

Thank you very much! I appreciate your time viewing our work. :)

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Week

Majestic Story Reel

Thank you very much! We really enjoyed reading your feedback. This is some great thinking. We truly are taking in all feedback from this process. We are hopeful to try again sometime. Congratulations to you and your team as well! I really enjoyed your team’s Story idea too. We read to our little one, and I love the idea of the story getting carried away. It reminds me of the story Goodnight Opus by Berkeley Breathed. :)

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Week

El Diablico

This is such a beautiful story! Great art and use of color. I think the moral is very important and so positive. Congratulations on such an involved story with a clear message. :)

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Week

Majestic Story Reel

Hi Nicole! Thank you for your question. I assumed all cities have crows that live in the urban area, but now your question reminds me that maybe not all cities are plagued by cranky crows. :) I will remember this when I continue with the story.

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Week

"HELLO"

This is such a charming idea! I really like your visuals and the narration. It’s a very nostalgic piece. I appreciate your written narrative that you included in your submission. It’s nice to be able to read the narrative as well. Great art and depth to your scenes. The frame with your character holding the box of junk is relatable, and helps to establish the setting. Keep going :)

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Week

E L I X I R

Wow! Your work is just visually stunning and engaging to watch. Congratulations on such a successful submission. I am so excited to see your work in week 8 in its shining glory! I miss the dialogue, but your score is perfectly timed to the visuals it is definitely a different visual experience. I hope you continue this work. :)

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Week

Majestic Story Reel

Thank you, we appreciate your thoughtful comments and enthusiastic support! :D

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Week

Majestic Story Reel

Thank you for your thoughtful comments. :)

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Week

Porcelain bird

Thank you! :) Same to you, and enjoy this journey!

8

Week

love

Wow! I love this story. Beautiful, tender, and sweet exactly what we all need to be reminded of these days. I hope to continue to see your work. Congratulations on a profoundly beautiful piece of artwork.

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Week

Porcelain bird

I love your story! Your art is beautiful, and your story is very relatable filled with the longing for more. I urge you to continue and I really am so happy you chose this theme for your work. The camera positions within several of your scenes are very exciting as you take us into the story in a profound manner. Great use of perspective and character expressions. I truly thank you for sharing. :)

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Week

The Potion Shop

Fantastic storytelling! I really appreciate your use of color to provide contrast and light. Your art style really sets the mood.

8

Week

Creative Journey (WIP) (Sarah Estes)

Your art renderings are very impressive and expressive! Congratulations!

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Week

Bubble Pop

Excellent visual storytelling! I am so amazed by the expressive characters you developed in this reel. I can relate to this story and your character's feelings. I found the font size of the captions to be too small for the captions. I think a larger font with more beats to read the text would really help strengthen this wonderful work.

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Week

Wolf and Dragon- Acts 1, 2, & 3- Kayla Stith

I love the completion of the story and seeing Lobo develop and make a new family with the mother of the Dragons. it's a wonderful, blended family. Great job with the art looks like he really took the time.

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Week

ELIXIR - STORY SPINE

This was a wonderful story I can't stress how delightful it was between the music the art and the creativity of the story. I loved what death was actually doing and everybody misunderstood it so great plot twist. most importantly I love that the only thing that had real color was the elixir. it makes you focus on it more.

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Week

Rugula's Voice

The completion of your story was well done. I love the art that you used both in black and white as well as when you did color to your main character. really grateful that you shared this story with us.

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Week

GRANDFATHER - ROUGH STORY REEL


I love that your story connected three generations people with this a short story. I feel like this story could be in actual miniseries well you see the whole transformation like you would see over the season of a TV show that plays somewhere between 12 episodes to 24. and if that were the case I would love to watch it great job.

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Week

Smoke Me - A Cigarette in Love

When I first hear of your idea; I was not sure that this was going to be a good concept; however my partner told me to watch your video and he was correct your story has so much life and love. I want to say that I am thoroughly impressed by your project.

7

Week

+act 3

I love seeing that both the characters get along at the end did find a symbiosis. I also love how the main character lost her job then was able to get it back after reconciling with the monster.

6

Week

The Majestic: Act 1 & 2

Thank you, Francisco! That is such a compliment.

6

Week

Act 2

Great job on making the individual look exhausted and tired. It can be really conveyed through the drawings and I know that this is a very hard thing for people to do sometimes. I used to be an art teacher so I understand the complexity of it and it's a great job.

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Week

Samson the scared sword - Act 1 and Act 2

I love the artwork of your sword and the interactions as well as the waves of the magical powers. It's wonderful seeing that the sword is able to also tell what is healthy and not for people protecting them. I would really love to see a sequel to this sword. If not a sequel, a secondary sword with a different power maybe the wizard is actually paying pendants and these are his penance swords that are no longer weapons of war but are tools to rebuild the communities that he's helped to destroy.

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ELIXIR - ACT ONE / ACT TWO

I'm sorry that I missed your video from last week. I'm glad that they've combined the videos for this week because your story is great. It's rich with history and cultural views of death and being that it's important to Mexican culture I find it wonderful so thank you. In addition, the search for eternal life or salvation is a story that is shared amongst many different cultures and you do a great job conveying that. The art of your drawings are also very wonderful. I look forward to seeing the final act.

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