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Naz & Kati

I love the symbolic nature of this story. I feel it can have many meanings based on the emotional state of the viewer and I appreciate that. Great job!

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Act 2: Omen vs the Spirits

This has a very good children's book feel to it. with both omen and the spirits being sort of isolated from everyone else I hope that these spirits can relate to omen and have compassion for one another. Great Work!

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Bean. Act 1 and 2

First of all major kudos to the narrator, it was very engaging. Im in love with bean's optimism and am rooting for her success. the artwork was very expressive and I can't wait to see more!

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Wolf and Dragon- Act 1 & 2- Kayla Stith

This felt like I was watching a movie! you all have done an amazing job expressing the characters and their motives. I hope to see the mother and all of pitaya's siblings in act 3. Amazing work!

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Lost in translation

Moving to another country is a great relatable idea. This story is a path for Naila to come out her "shell" which is genius and subtle. Great work!

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Samson the scared sword - Act 1 and Act 2

this was a great act 1& 2. I love the idea of a sword that doesn't want to fight. stories that show how violence is not the answer have become popular in recent years especially in cartoons. I think it would be cool to integrate this idea into act 3. Great work!

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Lenny & Twirl

This was a very good set up for Act 2. I was so invested in what the tree was and why it could communicate. Keep up the Great work!

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Cian and the Metaverse

This story sets up an interesting world. I feel invested in this world and hope to see this character explore it more. Good Job!

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Act 1

This first act managed to capture a feeling of wholesomeness. Instead of worrying about what will happen next I instead get a sense of wonder from this. Great job Sam.

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The Little Apprentice - Act One

I enjoyed this intro to this story. I can already get a feel for each characters personality. Great work!

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Snowed In Act 1 (with subtitles)

I think this is a great first act. this made me interested to see how they handle the situation they are in.

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Croxi - Act 1

This is great. I watched this with just the visuals and the action in itself was very telling.

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Majestic

Good job on this one! I feel like I have a solid understanding of the story, I just wish there was a little bit moor artwork to compliment what was being told. overall I enjoyed this!

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Fuga's Journey- Area 51 and Beyond: Story Spine

this was an interesting one to watch. this is the first story I've seen that went with a darker tone (major props for that). I feel like there were a lot of elements to keep track of but the message of self-sacrifice made for a great story. Great work overall!

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Story Spine Mona

Being a college student I found this to be very profound. I feel like the message can apply to multiple situations. great work.

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Bedtime Story Spine

this was an incredible story. it had a wholesome message and was creative in its visuals. It reminds me of children tv shows I grew up watching! amazing work!

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Croxi - Briar and Captain’s Adventure

This story has amazing artwork. I felt very invested in the story and the world. Even though the lesson is one we all know, it was expressed in a fun new way. amazing job.

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"Hello" Story Spine

this is a cute story. I feel like it can represent a language barrier or how youth act when around the elderly. good job.

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Alex's Work Environment

the framing of this shot bis perfect. its a frame within a frame. This messy office along with the obnoxious workers tells us everything about how this character is feeling. She appears to be the only woman in this office space which can be especially difficult with coworkers like these.

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Rainy Day-Kayla Stith

I love imagery in the rain. usually rain makes us feel lonely, but our two protagonists have each other. Very heartwarming.

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Marin: A new friend, perhaps?

this is a very cozy setting. the warm lighting compliments the shady village! I love it.

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Leo, Luan, and their son Luke

this is a cute setting. even though this is under a blanket the lighting and stars portray a magical place that puts us in this child's sense of wonder! good job!

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Office, City, Trouble

I love how you put so much drama into this one room. the broken glass reveals a larger city and a threatening presence that will soon come. great job!

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Leslie Makes the Call

This is a great piece. the stranger coming through being completely dark makes this protagonist's adventure a mystery.

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"I'll see you guys in Spring..."

I love the depth in this artwork. The fact that dark and light surround each character makes their emotions clear.

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