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Toro

Great story and amazing, amazing artwork as well.

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Storm Hero - Final Storyreel

Great art and a really cool story as well.

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Skelly and Rachel

Very well done animatic. Seems professional already. Interesting story as well and the artwork is awesome.

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Adam

The story is a little light for me. The mddle could have been a little more dramatic/exciting.

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Two Witches and a Star

really love the art style and the story

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Chap and Chop Story Spine

Great art work and story.

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Orion the Brave - Spine Story

Great art and a really nice story as well. I was wondering why only Orion had the power to stop the meteorite ? Is he a special constellation ?

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Grandfather Story Spine

Amazing art, amazing story. I like the subtle use of color, like only coloring the handkerchief, to signify its importance. Definitely one of my favorites.

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Cornelius - Story Spine

This is really cool, the idea of him taking on the color of the people he helps is a great metaphor. I wonder what created his dependence on helping people ?

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Jett's Story Spine - When Home Runs Away

Really cool and interesting concept with nature literally having a mind of its own.

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Facing reality

THe composition and perspective is really good.

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Racing towards his goal.

Really like the use of perspective here.
Maybe add another figure in the distance to further show that this is a race, or maybe some action lines to indicate how fast he’s going.

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Parten is Paid a Visit

Love the light, shadow and perspective used here

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Trouble Maker

Really like the use of light, shadow, and perspective.

I’d suggest maybe a few more details to emphasize these are two different characters in two different situations.

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Week 3

I like the slight blur of the buildings to really emphasize Rex being in the foreground.

Is he just walking around unnoticed ? Did he just arrive at that spot via some time warp ?

Maybe have another object in the foreground with him so we get a guard of his big he actually is

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Kahlani's View of their World

I really like the perspective the character is being shown from, almost as if they’re longing for an escape.

Is the world they live in above water ? Are they a special kind of mermaid that can live out of water ?

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Insect mafias, idioms turned real, and generative dreams

The idea of whatever you've dreamed at night coming true the night before is a really dope idea. What I really started thinking about was how people can't control what they dream and the fear of the unknown of what will come true the next day. What was unclear to me was if people who are in each others dreams have blended realities the next day.

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What ifs…..

I really liked the idea of a spider keeping ap natry in your ears while you slept. It made me think about the idea of smaller worlds immersed within larger ones. The one thing I wasn't sure about was how the person would go on without feeling a pantry inside of their ear.

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