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3 Ambers

I love the potential question #1 has to be visually stunning! I wonder how you will convey her synesthesia to the audience. Will we see it through her perspective? How will her magic be affected because of the synesthesia? Does it become a nuisance or an advantage?

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WHAT IF... by Francisco Gonzalez

My favorite idea is question #1 because I love the idea of a child going through a perilous journey on a donkey (or mule) to find the coveted elixir of immortality. I wonder how the child will come across the elixir. Is it on accident or on purpose? Are there any consequences to taking the elixir from its hiding spot? Will he drink it? Sell it? Why does he want it?

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What If.

I gotta say, all of your ideas are great! It was so hard choosing just one, but since I'm a sucker for a good angsty romance I have to go with #2! Just the potential angst, despair, and possible true love make this the best story option, in my opinion. I wonder how the lovers will meet or if they will ever meet. How do the watches work? Are you born with them? Are they attached to your skin or can you take them off? Why would your watch break and is there a way to fix it?

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What if..

Question #2 is hilarious! I love the idea of a scaredy-cat sword refusing to leave it's cave because it doesn't want to fight! I wonder how the knight will get gain the sword's trust and fight alongside him. Is the guy shown above a knight? What kind of magical abilities does the sword possess?

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What If? - Emma Gamboa

"What if...?" question #3 has a lot of promise! It really resonated with me and how some parents hold incredibly high standards for their children even if they do it out of "love." I can see it playing out in many ways, so I wonder which path you will choose to explore. Something I found unclear is how are the children being made? Are they being biologically engineered or are they literal robots (androids?) being made in a factory? Anyways, awesome idea! I hope you choose this one because I'm interested to see where you take it!

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Pietro - Write for Animation Team

I love the potential "What if...??" question #1 brings to the table because it can explore the theme of toxic relationships and also bring in conversations about substance abuse. I wonder how the cigarette would fall in love with the girl and how their relationship would develop throughout the story. Since a cigarette is meant to be smoked once and thrown away, maybe you can instead make a pack of cigarettes be the one to fall in love with the girl and progressively as she smokes through the pack show how the cigarette box falls for the girl. Something that was unclear to me was how the cigarette could fall in love with the girl? Does the cigarette have a soul? Is it a magic cigarette? Again, I see a lot of potential in this idea and I'm very interested to see where you take this!

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