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A melody

of course!! i really loved the story so much :))

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Working Title: Oh My Fang!

thank you so much, Manea-Joy!! yess the friendship & mentoring-like relationship between our two main characters was something we tried to focus on, so glad you like it!!

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Working Title: Oh My Fang!

thank you Mckenna!! ahh yes next time we hope that there will be less background noise. i was wondering if theres a way to edit it out, do you know perhaps?

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Working Title: Oh My Fang!

thank you for your compliments, Sam! thank you for your feedback about the character narration- which specific parts is the narration confusing?

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Working Title: Oh My Fang!

ahh thank you Malia! lol yes one of the aspects that we really wanted to convey character through was the voice acting, glad you liked it :) and thank you for your feedback about the ending!

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A World Without Shadows Storyboard

i love the concept of this story! it's really cool how Finely realizes his true self and learns to accept his shadow and not let others' criticism affect him so much. the music and sound effects (ex. heartbeat) add a lot to this storyreel as well! nice job

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A melody

i love the concept of the story! it's really unique and cool, and i like how you used the name "Melody" and the musical term "melody" to add meaning to ur story! also the animations are really well done!! great jobb

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Working Title: Oh My Fang!

haha yesss Gary :))

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Flora and Fauna

omg ur drawings are so pretty and amazing, and deliver a fantasy/mythical mood which is so cool! nice story as well :))

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MLJ

i love the music!!! it sounds really nice and adds a really cool element to your storyreel. also i love how u included many languages, thats really unique and cool!!

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Kara

I love the moral of your story, and how the plot moves along. Your artwork is also really nice! I can't wait to see what happens :)

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Antonio's Village

I like your drawing of Antonio's village, and how the tree specifically is drawn! I can recognize Antonio in the drawing, but I wonder who the other character is? Are they a character who is mentioned in the story, or just a village member? Nice job with the drawings overall!

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Magic of Music

Ooh this idea seems really intriguing. I like how the drawing has a path (that sees rocky, possibly?) that the characters have to walk through to get to the shiny door(?) which seems to lead to their goal possibly? I think this is really cool, and the artwork is really nice as well!! Excited to see what happens to Vinell and their friend.

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Danylo's world.

The drawings and the color palette are really nice and represent the connotative mood that your story seems to revolve around. Something I noticed is that the stationary buildings and the tree in the mid-ground of the image seem to be adhering to the laws of gravity, however objects like cars and planes seem to be going haywire. Is this purposeful? I really like your story idea! Can't wait to see what happens!

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Village on fire

I really like the way you have drawn perspective and depth on the road(?). The shading is also really nice! I wonder what your characters are doing in this scene. Are they fighting or conversing? Nice scenery artwork overall!!

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Week 2 Character profile

I really like your idea of how your character has a goal that seems quite personal. I wonder what you mean by on "the surface"? Is it like a condition that is physically on the grandmothers skin, or something different? Either way, I think this idea is really nice and has a relatable touch to it!

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Week 2 - Antonio

I like how your team has chosen specific animals that are the villains (jaguar, python, piranha) which initially seem to give off a negative connotation. I wonder how Antonio will overcome his obstacle and learn to "share the load"! Also, the artwork of your main character is really nice!

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What If....

I'm really intrigued by your last "What If?" question about a boy becoming friends with the monsters in his home! When you think of these monsters, do you think of nice monsters or mean and scary monsters?

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What If... - Rushmi Singh

Whoa, I really like how deep and thoughtful ur "What If?" questions are! For the first one about the two friends' dreams of leaving the city, I wonder if it would be the same exact dream or a similar dream.

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What if?

I really like your first "What If?" question related to fairies! I wonder if there is something that made the fairies visible, like going through a portal thats possibly concealed in a fairy house? Nice job with the drawings as well!

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What if...

I like your idea of a magic tape that can hold up the heaviest thing. It makes me wonder about how the tape specifically was created.

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