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The two kingdoms.

Great story. Good pictures.

8

Week

The Life of the Spider in the Corner

Good pictures. Do more talking.

8

Week

Hueys Story

Good speaking. Zoom out on the pictures.

8

Week

Her soulmate was her enemy

Good pictures. Good speaking.

8

Week

Derek and The Money Tree

Zoom out on the pictures. Good job talking loud.

6

Week

Act 2

Good story

6

Week

2

Speak louder. Good story

6

Week

Act 1&2

Good job speaking. I wonder what happens next.

6

Week

Golden dream

Speak louder. I love your story

6

Week

Act 1 and 2

I love your story. Good job speaking loudly.

6

Week

Act 1 and 2

Have everyone speak

5

Week

Act 1

I like your story.

5

Week

Storyboard

I like the idea.I wonder what happens after he finds the tool.

5

Week

PTMB

I like the idea of the story. But try to speak more clear.

5

Week

Caden H, Jacinta, lane

I like that it was clearly spoken. I like the idea

5

Week

Week 5

I think you should zoom in on the pictures. I likes that you talked clearly.

5

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Act 1 Minor Beats

I liked that you guys talked clearly.

3

Week

Character

I like your perspective of the story. Add some color.

3

Week

Gold Rush

I like the color in the story. Add a face to the character for emotion.

3

Week

Jeff orey

There is no characters. I think you should add color.

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Week 3

I like that there is emotion in the story. I like that there is color.

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Week 3

I like that there is lots of emotion. I think you should add color.

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Characters

I think you should add color. I like your perspective.

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Week 2

I like your story and you gave us a bunch of information.

2

Week

Character profile

I like your story and you got all the information for us to understand it.

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