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Joe Marinoʻs new business venture 🙏

I really enjoyed how you didn't stay stagnant on one drawing in the beginning, and ended by posing a question to the audience.

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Collin by Emilia Melville

I like how you slowly panned down to his shoes, which seem to be a symbol of his letting go and 'breaking free'.

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Character Profile: Jeane!

The fact that you described the struggles of this character, and what they need to do to overcome them, really helped me see what kind of story he could fit into.

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Ted Anser

I like how you listed his traits below to make them more clear, and added in glimpses of his tattoos to show us a little more deeply what kind of person he is.

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Character Profile

I like how you described the way he moves, it really helps me imagine this chacter.

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Character submission

I like how you got into the characters' emotions and views on the situation they're in, something I'm curious about is: what's this goblin's motivation for become a guard?

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What if...

The 1st and 3rd questions make me think of science fiction novels, really interesting pathways for a story. One thing I'm wondering about is, for question 1, if the virus only targets humans, or if it also hurts wildlife?

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What if?

The concept of rocks becoming self-aware is such an original idea.

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What if...

I like how a lot of these had an animal theme to them, and were simple questions with immense room for storytelling opportunities

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3 what if's

I like how complex the second idea is, you provide a lot of detail.

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What if there was a sacred tree, a mushroom person, and a tanuki?

I love that you're already exploring characters and their possible names, I also think that your drawings are very diverse in colorful.

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Week 1 What Ifs

For your first idea- the concept of a self-telling story is so compelling! I also really like the scenario of two officers entering a haunted home.

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