Lux Act 1

Interesting idea!

Week 5

This is amazing. It leaves me wondering what will happen next and what the world looks like. Great job!

Joeʻs Act 1

This is one of the best ideas yet! The cliffhanger is just so good.

Gold crash

Interesting.

THE KINGDOM WHOSE PRINCESS WAS TURNED TO A WITCH

I love the idea. But try not to stutter to much. Other than that this is a great idea. Maybe you could draw a castle background or something. Great idea!

Story Spine

Where are the pictures?

Oak the Tanuki Character Profile

I think it’s great. It really makes me think about what is ahead of the journey or journeys.

Vinell

I love this idea. It is very detailed. Really makes you think.

Bait

I like the idea but it sounds a lot like finding Nemo.

Duke The Ranger

I love the idea. But you are missing the what if. This idea really makes me think about the adventures he could take.

My what if statements

I like the devil and angel one. It makes me wonder how they would act together and if they would hate each other or be fine with each other. It’s unclear how they got there and if everyone has them.

Greer - What If?

I liked the cookies one but I think you could make it better by writing what she sees in her future. I wonder if she eats different types of cookies she sees different things.