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Night Light Storyreel

Nice color and pictures. I like the story and fun idea. What would happen if a big was mean? Would he just decline?

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Ahmik

Sometimes it cut out but I like the pictures. Why were the buffalo dead?

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Act 3

I like your pictures and the detail. Where did he find the kid?

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Act 1, 2, 3

Spoke loudly and clearly, I like how the pictures were from different views. What made him follow the deer?

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Oregon Trail

Liked the pictures and you some clearly. How did the wagon break?

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Ana, Andrea, Walker, Donivan

Nice pictures and good story. You guys spoke very clearly. Make sure pictures stay still

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Week 7

We like the drawings and story. Slow down when talking and make sure your words don’t cut out. Also make sure the camera isn’t moving so much.

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Cowboys

Good drawing and good plot line.

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Act 3

Like the idea. Where was the history? Maybe make pictures more detailed.

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Week 7

I like the story but maybe talk a little louder

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Gold rush

Good story and idea. Lots of background noise and make pictures more detailed.

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James and Kyle

Nice drawings and spoke clearly.

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act i and act ii

I like the plot line and the colorful pictures.

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Act 1 and 2

I like your drawings.

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Earth's lament

I liked the pictures and how you animated some

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Lux Act 1

Cool idea and nice pictures!

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The tail of Inji

Super descriptive and I liked the idea.

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Act 1

I like how you showed emotions in the pictures, good idea

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The Story of a Cool Colored Vampire

You spoke clearly and loudly, maybe some more pictures.

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THE GOOD PRINCESS WHO WAS TURNED TO A CRUEL WITCH UNTILL....

Good idea but the music is a little loud and we can’t really hear you.

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Story Spine Cloud Surfing idk

I liked the drawings and ideas. Loved how she’s showed emotion in pictures

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PO’s World

I like the creative idea and how many details and colors.

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Gummi Land

I like all the detail and different colors.

3

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Greenhouse

I like the details and shading in the picture.

3

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Why won't you believe me? (Character in their world sketch)

I love the idea a clarity of the picture. I like the parts you colored.

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