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WHAT IF... by Francisco Gonzalez

I really liked the cat and mouse love story idea. It's very ironic, yet has that juxtaposition to give it a good twist. I'm curious if this is set in a universe where cats and mice are forbidden to be with one another? I'm also a little confused on how these characters meet/fall in love? I like the idea!

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What if...

My favorite idea was the record player teleport device, I feel there's a lot of different story routes you could potentially go with that. Im curious how the person in your drawing came to get that record player? Maybe it was passed down onto her? Is anyone looking for this device? Im a little unclear on how time will be affected while she time travels. Overall, really great idea, I'm excited to see where you take it!

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What If... Three Ideas by JC Holmes

Hello, I really liked the horror movie killer idea, I feel there's a lot of comedic gags and skits you could do with this. I also like the juxtaposition you have going on of a bad guy trying to reiterate himself into our modern working-class world. I'm curious if there was a certain event in the killer's life that made him want to stop living the same life he was?

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Week 1-What if?

Hello! I was really drawn to the shapeshifter idea, I feel there is so much to unpack in just that concept alone. There is a lot of emotional story potential, especially in the second half of the description. I'm curious if there are any other shapeshifters in this world, and also how did this girl even come to be a shapeshifter. I guess I'm just a little unclear about how this person forgot their original form? Did they also forget their whole past life? There's lots of interesting paths this story already has me headed down!

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Week 1: What If

Hello! I really felt the meeting future selfs idea is so interesting, and also has a ton of potential with different story routes. I was curious how you would depict the different selfs you'd run into, what would be the age gap between them all? I was a little confused by the first idea. Maybe the roots idea could be more intriguing if there was a way to simplify the backstory about how the girl came to get this condition she has.

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