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Wolf and Dragon

WOW!!! The sound effect for this reel are amazing. Great Job. I remember the narrations from the past and good follow along well. The background music is just enough. Awesome Job.

8

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El Diablico

This story is great. The introduction of color is great. The sound effect works great in your storyreel. The story flows smoothly and is amazing.

8

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The Potion Shop

Interesting story. I wish there was more color throughout, some frames really need color. The narration was overpowering the images. I would have like the to be some sound effects and background music.

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Lottie

The single line artwork is done very well. The story progresses smoothly. THe background music fits nicely as well.

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Naz & Lili

I love the overall look and feel of the background music and the monotone color palette. The storyline had a greet message.

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Party Parrots NFT

I like this concept. I understand it is like an 8 bit design, but I wish there was more details or a background of some kind.

7

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The Antique Store - Acts 1, 2 & 3

Ghosts how wonderful. I love this story from beginning to the end. I want to see more. The composition is your scenes is great. Very easy to follow and understand. Great job.

7

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Act 1, 2, 3 Storyreel

Great story! I love the Grayscale of the artwork with only a hint of color at the end. I have followed this story as it developed. Great progression. Great work.

7

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Lenny and the Song of the Forest

I have enjoyed watching this story develop. Your team should be very proud. Great work.

7

Week

Skyfellers Rough Cut <3

This story truly makes me laugh. I like this take on cowboys and dragons. I can't wait to see the final submission.

7

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ELIXIR - STORY SPINE

Great story. It is evenly balanced between sadness and excitement. I like how the artwork work well with the story and sound effects.

7

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No Such Thing as Aliens, Act 1-2-3 (A freaking week late)

Our was last as well no worries. Life happens. I love the simple art work it really works well. I wonder what you will add for the final submission.

6

Week

Act 1 & 2

This chunking artwork is nice to see. I can't wait to see your teams final work.

6

Week

ACT 1 & 2

The hand drawn artwork is amazing. The final submission will be great.

6

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Axel the Kangaroo, Acts 1 + 2

I like the playfulness of the artwork. The storytelling is great. I wont to see how this wraps up.

6

Week

POr las barbas de mi gato (My cat´s whiskers)

The character development is great. I love the art style. Your final submission should be great.

6

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Future Selves

The simple linework really works with this story. The final should be great.

6

Week

Skelly Act 1+2

I love how this story is going. I love the art style. great job.

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Lenny & Twirl

I love the "Wizard of Oz" look to this reel, where is start in a boring black and white city of tall building, only to walk in to a dry forest full of color. A boy and his toy, a story as old as time. I love it. Act 2 should be fantastic.

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Act 1 Storyreel

This is a very compelling story. I'm curious to the big picture, where are we going? is this just some trick to get her to fix his coffee maker. I'm truly intrigued to what comes next.

5

Week

Orion the Brave - Act1

Great Act 1! There is a lot of information to digest, but I love the idea of living constellations sitting above the world protecting us. The idea of a huge battle in the sky is great. I thought I would see a reference to shooting stars, but may be that will be in Act 2.

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The Little Apprentice - Act One

Awesome. Even with no sound I can totally see what is happening. The storytelling is easy to follow with the body language and face expressions. I don't even think you need the red arrows unless they are just artist marks or will somehow play into the stroy later. Great job!

5

Week

Act One Storyboard!

Nice mystical creatures playing the ultimate hide and seek. I enjoy this idea it is a new look at old stories a lot of people know with a new spin on it. Act 2 should be pretty entertaining.

5

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Skyfellers - Act I

This story is quite unique, Cowboys and Dragons....Awesome. I would like to see more about the world, since they are just in this one area, WHY? If no one is capitalizing off of the dragon why is the town getting so big and expensive? I can't wait to see Act 2.

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Globe City - Act 1

There is a lot of foreshadowing in Act 1.
The PJ.
The Basement
There is more scenes to and but for timing and file size some were removed.
Thank you for your feedback
Team 50/50

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