I think your ideas are unique. I liked the story about the gang member with no eyes the best. I did find it hard to understand a couple of words. Did you say portal for the last story. I think your speed of speaking was good because it matched your pictures.
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What I found most interesting about your story is that you are living somewhere different from where you are from. There was nothing unclear in your video. I think the pace of your story was good for the viewer. I really liked the background music you added.