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Act 1 Storyreel

Great work! Why and how has Alex been trapped in her monotonous life? What makes her life monotonous? Love the direction this is going.

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Bad Timing - Act 1

Great submission: Loved how detailed you all explained the monotony of Leslie's life. I would consider mentioning the date earlier in the narrative and then remind us later that she is late to it. Excited to see how this story expands and unfolds.

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Eternal Jade ACT 1

Wow! Great video & storyboards! Excited to see what else the team comes up with!

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PTMB

Great work! What about Elijah and Samuel makes them such good friends? What about the Oregon trail stood out to them and made them want to explore? Excited to see more!

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Josh

Hi guys - great work! Why exactly is it that Josh believes he's the best of all time and why does this begin to tire him? Great job; excited to hear more!

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107 in the Yard

Wow! Great submission! Considering thinking about why 107 wants to be played with and how you can communicate this to your audience. Also consider letting the audience know why it is exactly that 107's world is rough. Great job - love how this is turning out!

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