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This is Jade

We love the setting and Jade's dilemma to save or exploit. It makes us wonder more about their family legacy. It was unclear what the nature of the alien plant is, and why it's so important or how it ties back to saving the Amazon.

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ALVARO'S CHARACTER

We really like Cian and that he gets to enter a fantasy world where he feels happy and powerful. It makes us wonder what the real world is like that he'd prefer to never go outside. It was unclear what made him realize he spends too much time in the meta verse.

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Character Profile - Meet Iris

Our favorite thing is the message - to keep trying something new, and her loves and passions. It makes us wonder what other people think of her, and why people don't notice her despite her bright clothes.

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Week 2

We love that he's a square, and we love the illustrations of him trying to be cool. It makes us wonder what the cool activities are that inch the snow globe forward, and are there any other threats (does anyone ever try to shake the snow globe? Has that ever happened? What do the citizens think of the shaking, and do they ever wish it would snow?

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Leonardo, with his head in the Stars

We love that Leonardo has bruises because he's so clumsy, that he's always munching on carrots, and that he wants friends. It makes us wonder what the people around him are into that he can't find other people who are also interested in space. The only thing unclear - does he use the camera/binoculars to see space? Are they special and powerful, or does he have other equipment to observe the stars?

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Character profile

My favorite attribute of Jamie is that she's very tall and a music nerd. It makes me wonder who her music heroes are, and if she has any pressure to be a model or a basketball player because she's so tall. The only thing that's unclear is what prevents her from working hard - is her obstacle only hours of practice, and if so what stands in her way.

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What if teasers

All three are great. We like the 3rd one best (18th Bday) because it feels like a fun heightening of the real life pressure you have when you choose a college or career. Wonder: Does everyone choose from the same options, is it a big ceremony that your family attends, etc. The only thing unclear: Does everyone in this world know what they want to be or are some people unsure and can you change later on or is it SET once it's set.

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samantha ho—what if...?

Love the brother and sister in the video game, because its a fun world and they're automatically in danger. It makes me wonder what their relationship was like in real life and how that will impact the game. Only thing unclear is are they a team in the game or against each other in the game.

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what if… elevator monsters, forever trash, death not guaranteed

Love the first one because it seems like such a fun location and concept. It makes me wonder if he's gonna be a monster, a bad guy, a hotel VIP, etc, they all seem like fun options. The only thing unclear to us is: does the monster take on more of a blob like/gelatinous appearance because people drop a lot of gum down there, or is it like a ton of little things fused together-- . Love the illustration of the monster.

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What if

All great ideas, but the birthmark one is our favorite because it feels like it sets up a fun hero. It makes me wonder what all the various birth marks are and what society thinks about a person who didn't get one. Only thing "unclear", who interprets the birthmark, like, who decides that just because you have a tree birthmark that means you're a park ranger vs lumberjack vs horticulturist etc.

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Busses, Lights, Music

We liked all three ideas. The Bus as a Bath idea feels like it could be really fun to explore visually, a fun little journey. It makes me curious about the rules, does the water flow in and out of the bus when people get in etc and how do people do regular bus things (read their books, do their homework) which all seem like fun things to see. What was unclear was: is this all buses or just one bus, and do most people want this service/experience.

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What If by The Deep Inkers

Favorite idea is Penguins learning to fly!
It makes me wonder about their personalities and aspirations.
Nothing is unclear really, the illustration implies they are going to be pilots, but do they also learn or strive to fly with their tiny wings?

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