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Cora and the Hourglass

Great artwork and story!

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Shock and Mars

The pace of the narration was a little slow and makes it a little hard to understand. Apart from that the story is great.

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THE PRINCESS AND THE WITCH

The art is nice but I think you could've made the pictures more clear with better lighting but that's just me. I don't understand why the witch lives so close by. Nice story.

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Final Story reel Miguel's Portal

The idea is great! the moral of the story had me very engaged.

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Memories

I love the idea and the drawings are really good. The artwork has the potential to compliment the story.

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The Princess

I love the colors that were used in this story, the vibrant colors makes the story feel fresh and new. The story idea is great as well.

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Julio Act 1,2,3

Very interesting story! the art however surprised me the most since it was so consistent and good. I don't think there was a single bad imagine in this entire movie.

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The tale of Bing

Also there is something I would like to suggest, what if the souls and spirits of all the samurai were trapped in the sword. So when the girl holds it, she gets all the experience and power of all the samurai combined.

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Finley's Story Acts 1,2, &3

Nice story! really well put together.

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Draw Your Life (Ted's Minor Beats - Act 3)

Beautiful story! how did he make them come to life? if it was a power then he should still have it unless he lost it which is what made him sad and lonely.

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MIlo and Connor

Great drawings and story, but how do they get funding for something so powerful and revolutionary. however the moral of the story is good and I like how they went back to being friends after they got themselves into this mess.

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The tale of Bing

The story is nice and fresh, However who are the allies that can stand up to the mongols? and unless there is magic involved the little girl wouldn't really stand a chance since she is untrained.
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Madeleine Devlin-Week 7-Acts 1,2&3

Great story and artwork. However this doesn't really make sense to me how Moxie doesn't care that there is a monster 5x bigger than all of the stuffies.

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Acts 1, 2, & 3

Beautiful story of value and friendship! I love how she started as someone who cared more about plants than human beings. She later developed her new values and chooses humans over plants.

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Act 1,Act2 and Act3

Great story, the artwork helps me vision what's going on clearly.

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Week 7 Submission

Beautiful animation and story telling, I have no questions since everything is so clear. Great Work!

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Tj's Desire - Act 1-3

The artwork looks great and complements the story.

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Trail of tears

I like the story but I have a question that I feel many can relate to. Where did the Indians go? There are many more but I feel like that one is the most important one.

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The Princess

I feel like there could be more detail, Not enough explaining.

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Week 7

That was a great plot twist that the reader could almost never expect! And the backstory ties everything together. Great Job!

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Week seven story board about slavery

I feel like slavery didn't need to get involved and there are some unnecessary comments that were in there. However, The story has a nice direction and it was put together well! Good Job!

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Ana, Andrea, Walker, Donivan

I love this scenario of the Oregon Trail! I see it all the time and it never fails to bring something new to the table! I like the direction of the story and I think it is going to end out good.

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Lulus Adventure

I like how the story is original and fresh and it is based on the dog and not a human! really good!

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Act 1&2

The tree plot seems like it works well and has me hooked, but how did the girl know the tree could hear her

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Week 7

I love the way you pulled this story together. I love the dedication of you answering the common questions that the viewer may have asked. Great Job!

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