Week 5

I love the idea, but my one suggestion is to make the photos that your taking of the drawing, more just only the drawing. So we don’t see the scene ———.

Act 1 Storyreel

I love the firefly’s! Great idea

Earth's lament

Love the idea, I’m so excited for whatever’s next

Draw Your Life (Ted's Minor Beats - Act 1)

I love your video and your drawing

Act 1

Very snazzy(cool)

Act 1 Finley Aspen

Love it! Very descriptive!

Story Spine

Where are the characters! Loved your story! I think that you should talk louder, and talk in a more quiet space, if you want to!

Story Spine for Luna

This is a lot like “The American Revolution”. I like the meaning of the story, the lesson!

STory SPine

I loved the drawings! Something I didn’t like is how fast you spoke, but I could understand everything that you were saying, this is just a suggestion!
#GirlBoss

Musical Challenges

Loved it!

story spine

I liked you drawing technique. Something unclear was the part when you said something about when she could see colors. Something you could work on is… the tone that your using. During some of the sad scenes, your voice stayed the same.

Jonathon Q. Sniffer

Your storyline is AMAZING! I was wondering, do they ever get reunited?

Marx the Skeleton

How did he get into the dry cleaning job?
Nothing was unclear?
You are an AMAZING drawer.

clover

OMG, I’m so jealous of your drawing skills. “BRAVO”!

Trejana

You are an AMAZING drawer!