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Eritrea Calling

This story has so many possibilities for expansion. The introduction makes me want to engage and prepare for the journey ahead. I would really like to know more details around how the test arrives so quickly? Why was the main character chosen to go on this adventure? Is this experience unique to this character only? Love the potential. Great work!

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Book of S full story

I can relate to this character a lot. There are so many emotions captured in the art. The sketchbook doubles as a main character and makes me want to know more about its powers. Very creative! Nice job!

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Wolf and Dragon

The music and sound effects are a great addition to the story. The art is very well done and captures the charters moods and expressions very well. The story really moves forward through the large amount of illustrations contributed to the story reel. Well done!

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The Shadow Bazaar

Great drawing style. The story was a little hard to follow toward the end. I did enjoy the small descriptions and attention to detail but some of those elements can be shortened to help the story to progress. Good work.

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Friends From Far Away

This story reel is very well done. The drawing style has a nice look and the color in relation to each character gave me the ability identify the characters quickly and follow the story. Also all of the sound effects provided a very nice extra layer to support the scenes. Great job!

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Not all Shells sound like the Ocean

I really enjoyed the concept the great artwork and creativity. There may be room for giving some background behind the characters move to the new country. Great work!

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