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Flora and Fauna

it's dotted journaling paper! :)

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Back To You

I think it's a cute relationship between a girl and a cat! The format doesn't seem the best for storytelling, do you think that you could just voice the script instead of putting it on the images? I liked the themes of loneliness!!

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Cowspiracy All 3 acts

very cute! I'm a fan of the blue lineart. I do think you could try importing more of a moral or theme. Other than that, it's very slay good job

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Week 7 Submission

It's very cute!! I think that the backgrounds in the art could be more flushed out, but the dialogue and characters are an amazing strong point!

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Weighted

I love how you captured perspectives and expression, and how you included a diverse cast. The storytelling through images is really good!

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Night Light Storyreel

I love your storytelling through images!! It's a very cute and interesting concept, and there's not much to change. I do think that you could maybe give a more detailed narration, but good job!

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Roommates all Acts

The art, perspective, and expressions are amazing!! I do think that you should make a more clear reason for all the things that have happened, and explain better the course of events.

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Madeleine Devlin- Week 5- Act 1

your linework and dialogue are very clear!! I do think the frames could be positioned a bit better to add emphasis but the setting is very distinguishable!

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ACT #1 ANIMATION

the animations are impressive!! I just think that you should add more context to how the human arrived and how these aliens live and discovered her, I also think it would be best to add to the plot in preparation for the climax.

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A Tiny Man Behind the Wall Socket

it's a very cute and detailed concept! his character design seems like it will be very recognizable. the setting does seem really intricate, so try not to get caught up in world building and try t make your voice-over louder next time.

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A Husk of a Hero

this is a fun concept with very good art! it seems very specific so try to make sure your story is clear. your voice-over is very charming as well!

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What If? 🙈 What If? 🙉 What If? 🙊

the perspective, compositions, and colours of your drawing are really good!! There's so much story potential in the prompts as well. :)

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what if - teaser vid!!

the illustrations are really cute!! the concepts are clever and charming

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