The adventure of a hunky cowman

Great art, great story, 10/10

THE PRINCESS AND THE WITCH

I liked the story! The art is nice, but I think it could have used some cropping. I am a little unclear about why the witch lives so close by. Great story!

Magic Backpack

Your voice is a little quiet. The art is really good. Im unclear about the story, because I really have to rely on the images because the voicing is quiet.

static

I like how you managed to do it with a lack of art. I think that more build up could have been added.

Her soulmate was her enemy

I liked the art style. I am unclear as to why the dude holds such a grudge. I think more backstory could help.

Final

I loved the use of sound effects and voicing. This does move a little bit fst. I am a little confused as to what they mean by "get rid of them all". All the people, or all the animal too?

act 1 2 and 3 dream factory

I am a little confused as to why the phone is being held up. I think using a computer and uploading from there could make it stronger.

bruh

Good art! What is the story? I think a stronger structure could help.

Week 7

Nice art! Why is the dog antisocial? I think backstory could help it a lot.

Story Xperiential Week 7 Submission

I liked the art.
Im confused as to what is happening
Maybe include the rest of the story?

Wyoming

The story made me feel like chaos can be art
I feel the moral is that insanity can be funny.

Week 7

The story made me think about how important friends are
I feel the moral is to understand others

Jonathon Q. Sniffer; Act 1 and 2

I liked how the overlapping PNGs give it a funny vibe
I think you could blend the colors on the PNGs a little more

Act 1 & 2

I liked the idea
I didn't understand the story, add more details?
I think you could improve the art style

Kara

I liked the story building
I think you could add a little more color

Tristen and Brad PARTY Act 2

I liked the fact you used music
I didn't understand why they chose to go to a museum of all things
I think you could make it a little more clear

Lil nee act 2

I liked the character design
I didn't understand what career he is going for
I think you could add more to the story of the towns abandonment

Banished Family

I liked how all frames were in full view
I didn't understand the beginning of the story
I think you could use non- computer-generated art

Aspen's Act 1 Story Reel

I liked how the early sketches were not erased, but incorporated into the final product
I was confused by what a "balloonian" is
I think you could use bigger boxes so thought bubbles don't have to pop out of them

Act 1

I liked the idea!
I think you could tell us more of the backstory of the criminals

Storyboard Rough Draft

I liked the sketches
I was confused by if this had inspiration from other sources
I think you could use your own voice instead of google

Salacia - Act 1

I liked the use of sound effects
I was confused by what is happening
I think you could work on picture & mic quality

Act 1

I liked the sketches a lot
I think you could expand on character development

Act 1 Storyreel

I liked the art style
I was confused by how to ocean spread.
I think you could have more stable shots

Jonathon Q. Sniffer

I liked the art
I was confused by how the carrots had sentience