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What ifs

These are some cool ideas but the one that I liked the most is seeing an alien while on a boat because it seems the more story / adventure based with having a random alien coming to normal person out of no where. I wonder whos pov we are going to view since we have 2 options. What was unclear is probably where the alien is coming from and how they are going to interact since in the image the alien is so huge?

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Hey Garrett! Thanks for the comment! Yeah I haven't decided on what pov to set the story as, either the vampire or child. I do want the middle schooler to be adopted and also maybe taking place in the summer so it could be a coming of age, since the next school semester they would be in high school. Thanks so much! I will refine the pitch of the story if i choose this or during my free time!

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Hey Matt thanks for the comment! I'm thinking of having the kid and vampire have very different dynamics, where the child is bubbly and cheerful, while the vampire living through so many things in life whether good or bad has more of a gloomy/low-spirited vibe. Also, the vampire being very overbearing with the child and wanting to protect them at all cost. Thanks! I think if i pick this story I will look more into how to draw the character to add the adjective!

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Thank you for your feedback! If i picked this story, I wanted to dive more into it by how strong the relationship with the person they are touching. So if it's like a best friend, you mostly know their past and some of their thoughts. I also wanted to maybe a cure or something that skips a generation, so the family is warry about it each generation. I would say she does have control of the powers and it all depends on her if she wants to further a relationship or not. I also didn't know how to interpret how she would look based on how she looks at peoples thoughts/past.

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WEEK 1: Something Different, Something New

Hey ! You're ideas are very cool! The one I enjoy is the evil family with the good child because I enjoy the type of dynamic it can produce and wither the family supports them or not. It makes me wonder if where they live is a "bad" area since there are more types of influence. The one thing that was unclear was if the child was born like this or was it something slowly happening?

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Carson's What If's!

Hey! You're ideas are really cool! The one that I liked the most was the carousel horse one because it can give an empathetic story/view. I wonder if every carousel is real or is it just this specific one? The thing that is unclear is are there people that interact with the horse? Can't wait to see what you pick!

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What If

The ideas you had were out of the box and cool! The one that I liked the most is the animals being alien's since I mostly imagine an alien looking completely different than animals. It makes me wonder if they took over all the original animals and there are no more "true animals"? The thing that made it unclear for me is if we are getting a documentary kind of style video or are we following one specific animal story?

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These ideas are creative and out of the box! The one i enjoy the most is the mermaid singing into seashells because finding something so simple that can give a lot of story! It makes me wonder if there is specific songs or they tie into their history? The thing that makes it unclear is if mermaids are hidden or some people know about them?

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samantha ho—what if...?

I love the young girl fighting her way through a jungle of unfamiliar foods because it makes me think of trying to humanize food and how it would move around in the real world. It makes me wonder how she will fight her way through the jungle and if she will escape. The only unclear thing at this moment, is how she got their in the first place and if the food is trying to harm her?

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Yeah! So you pick the one story you want to tell from the what if's and make the character or characters you want to show.

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Hey Olivia! I enjoy seeing the dancing ballerina and can't wait to see the ideas you come up with!

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Hey! Aaron ! Love the lil images that you put in the end and the stan loona one! Can't wait to see what you produce!

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